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14 years ago
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Ok i have made three descs so far. Not they are rough drafts and are just the begining of what i shall be dooing. Im going to post them up here so i can get feed back on them and get help from you all so i can improve . Please tell me what you all think.
Goo creature" Before you stood a creature that was neither solid nor liquid but a mix of both. Its body jiggled and bounced with every step it took on its translucent, peach colored legs. Its entire body had a peach like color with little splashes of pink in the mix. Its body never stayed the same, always shifting to different forms every day. Some days it would be a cute little Neko Mimi while other days it took the form of a busty raptoress. It always took on a female appearance but never showed nipples or a feminine slit on its groin unless it desired to take a mate. Do you dare approach this wonder of the natural world or do you walk away and wonder what fun you and it could have had...
Panthress" The doors to the bar would open and all heads would turn to see a tall panthress walk through the doorway. The woman’s curvy 6'2 frame clad in a red tube top, hugging her 36DD breasts that jiggled and swayed with every step of her stiletto boots as her motherly hips swayed and her plump rear bounced in her tight fitting knee length red skirt, her tail swaying invitingly almost beckoning the males in the room to come forth. Her long, lithe legs moved with a predatory grace as she walked through the smokey air of the room to the bar and orders a drink as her sapphire eyes scanned the room, looking for her next “victim” to fall prey to her charms.
dragon" The flapping of large wings could be heard upon the air as a shadow of a large beast passes above, looking up your moth would open in a scream of fear as a massive dragon fly’s past over head, its green and blue scaled form held aloft by massive bat like wings, each one 20 feet in length. Its body from snout to tail reached a whopping 14 feet in length, powerful muscles rippling under its scaled frame as it makes a turn in the air, its pupil less gold eyes focused on you as it began to dive, wings tucking in to its sides as it opens its maw wide in a mighty roar, rows upon rows of dagger like teeth glinting in the light as a bright light formed in its throat before it spewed forth white hot flames and seared the air, the air smelling of ozone before its wings opened out from the dive, the flames searing the tops of the treas at it flew upward into the sky out of sight with a soft chuckle as the dragon enjoyed its game of “scare the villagers” as it made its way back to its lair to bathe in the sun.
Please tell me what you think and help me to improve <3
Goo creature" Before you stood a creature that was neither solid nor liquid but a mix of both. Its body jiggled and bounced with every step it took on its translucent, peach colored legs. Its entire body had a peach like color with little splashes of pink in the mix. Its body never stayed the same, always shifting to different forms every day. Some days it would be a cute little Neko Mimi while other days it took the form of a busty raptoress. It always took on a female appearance but never showed nipples or a feminine slit on its groin unless it desired to take a mate. Do you dare approach this wonder of the natural world or do you walk away and wonder what fun you and it could have had...
Panthress" The doors to the bar would open and all heads would turn to see a tall panthress walk through the doorway. The woman’s curvy 6'2 frame clad in a red tube top, hugging her 36DD breasts that jiggled and swayed with every step of her stiletto boots as her motherly hips swayed and her plump rear bounced in her tight fitting knee length red skirt, her tail swaying invitingly almost beckoning the males in the room to come forth. Her long, lithe legs moved with a predatory grace as she walked through the smokey air of the room to the bar and orders a drink as her sapphire eyes scanned the room, looking for her next “victim” to fall prey to her charms.
dragon" The flapping of large wings could be heard upon the air as a shadow of a large beast passes above, looking up your moth would open in a scream of fear as a massive dragon fly’s past over head, its green and blue scaled form held aloft by massive bat like wings, each one 20 feet in length. Its body from snout to tail reached a whopping 14 feet in length, powerful muscles rippling under its scaled frame as it makes a turn in the air, its pupil less gold eyes focused on you as it began to dive, wings tucking in to its sides as it opens its maw wide in a mighty roar, rows upon rows of dagger like teeth glinting in the light as a bright light formed in its throat before it spewed forth white hot flames and seared the air, the air smelling of ozone before its wings opened out from the dive, the flames searing the tops of the treas at it flew upward into the sky out of sight with a soft chuckle as the dragon enjoyed its game of “scare the villagers” as it made its way back to its lair to bathe in the sun.
Please tell me what you think and help me to improve <3
