Writing again
14 years ago
So thanks to a friend of mine from far 'cross the sea, I'm writing again. Writing in no way means good. It's been mainly poetry since that;s the only type of writing I've ever done. Soon we will be doing a person 100 word a day challenge but won't be sharing it with others. It takes a lot for me to post things online because I'm aware of where my writing stands. On that note I am trying to post things online more, so here's something I wrote today:
I continually find myself immensely out of place.
Because I look amongst my friends to see:
artists, writers, musicians
...and me...
My smile, my mind and what I do as a baker,
could never compare to what you do with that paper.
I look upon your pages and don't understand,
why I too cant take what's in my mind and translate it with my hand.
All I do is rhyme, line after line,
Dr. Seuss and a child could produce writing so "fine".
This is all I can do to express what I want to say,
or I may snap, grab a friend by the shoulders and scream every thought scratching at my mind....one day.
I continually find myself immensely out of place.
Because I look amongst my friends to see:
artists, writers, musicians
...and me...
My smile, my mind and what I do as a baker,
could never compare to what you do with that paper.
I look upon your pages and don't understand,
why I too cant take what's in my mind and translate it with my hand.
All I do is rhyme, line after line,
Dr. Seuss and a child could produce writing so "fine".
This is all I can do to express what I want to say,
or I may snap, grab a friend by the shoulders and scream every thought scratching at my mind....one day.

Omadaun
~omadaun
great poetry

Morphine.Wulf
~morphine.wulf
OP
Thank you

Omadaun
~omadaun
no problem. so how have you been?

MacenGregora
~macengregora
This is better than you think. Trust me Keya.

Morphine.Wulf
~morphine.wulf
OP
Thank you Cody

Frobosh
~frobosh
I like it, writing is not about meeting a standard its about striving to express to the hearts content, it may spew rough and chunky but often, our emotions are rough and chunky. Your poem here is neither rough nor chunky, I found it flows and conveys meaning nicely. Thank you for sharing

Morphine.Wulf
~morphine.wulf
OP
Expect more from me in the future. Also did you bunnybutt dial me earlier?

thacoyote
~thacoyote
I like this a lot, it flows so well. Take my word for it , pup. =]

Morphine.Wulf
~morphine.wulf
OP
Thanks puppeh =)