so here is the modified version of my first poem :) - enjoy
'nature' now called 'Words of the Wolf' written January 07, 2012,:

Words of the Wolf

A Body, Touched;
By Grace of Nature.
A Soul filled;
With forgotten magic.

Society;
A ocean of people;
Trapped in habits,
Forged by routines.
But I see magic;
I see Power,
In those, who;
Embrace Passion.


The Passion Invokes;
True Life, True Energy.
When we are Alive;
We embrace Nature.

Nature ignites us,
Our true Spark;
Sets us Ablaze.

Our inner Flame;
Our inner Strength;
Sets us Free,
Our Enthralment;
Is at it’s End.

We are;
Free,
Magical,
Powerful and
Stronger than ever.

Live with Passion!