Oh god - I love this!

Krystal is having an aneurism. *cough* But that's chapter 6.

Chapter 5 is up for your viewing pleasure. I still don't like the last half of it, but Yawg threw cookies at me until I posted.

It's the only chapter where I had to pull back the last thousand words and rehash some of it and ditch the rest. Yeah, all that talking outside the bar for nothing.

Yawg likes the second version much better. I have to admit, I like the material more, but the delivery still irks me. Ah well.

Anyway, for this chapter, I was looking into snakes, their different venoms, mythology on snake charmers, the various colours and patterns of fatigues, and got completely hooked on a single song, which made it into the writing.

In other news, chapter 6 is well on its way. I think I'm two thirds done. The chapter I mean. Not Krystal's chapters. Tho... I better churn out sex really soon or else the rat that lives with me is going to start throwing things other than cookies.

Sneak peek!
At this point, Christoph loses it. The golden retriever is laughing so hard tears are running from his eyes. “McHorny?! That's what 'MsXehdO' translates to?”