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Desires of Demons part 1
14 years ago
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Moo!
I have re-uploaded Desires of Demons part 1.
I went back and did some heavy modification, expanding many parts of the story I felt needed better explination, and deleting a few paragraphs that were just bad. Almost every single paragraph has been touched in one way or another.
If you like the story, go back please and re-read it... I feel it should be far far better than it was previously.
I went back and did some heavy modification, expanding many parts of the story I felt needed better explination, and deleting a few paragraphs that were just bad. Almost every single paragraph has been touched in one way or another.
If you like the story, go back please and re-read it... I feel it should be far far better than it was previously.
