Hello -- this is to inform you that I've finally waded through critiques made by  Kindar, and have overwritten Chapters 2-5 with the updated version instead of posting new submissions.

Go and read them, and enjoy. :)

Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5

-Drew

EDIT: How damn annoying. :) I'm only gonna use Works to check for spelling. Jeez. heh. I cannot figure out how to disable Works' version of apostrophes and double quotes :P

Ah well, after double-checking double and single quotes in Wordpad, I found a few extra things to fix as well. heh. Enjoy. :)