I need an editor.
13 years ago
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My culminating assignment for Writer's Craft is due Monday, and because I'm doing a rather experimental novella, I'd like a bit of constructive criticism.
Really... I don't need hanky panky "Oh, this is swell, I really liked Onsey, he's a great character!" bullshit. I need a freakin' carnivorous motherfucker to do this shit, because I want this novella to be god-damn awesome!
Really... I don't need hanky panky "Oh, this is swell, I really liked Onsey, he's a great character!" bullshit. I need a freakin' carnivorous motherfucker to do this shit, because I want this novella to be god-damn awesome!
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Also, that misspelling of "writers" made me smile.