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So... RP logs?
13 years ago
I've seen a few talented folks put up RP logs (sometimes for sale, sometimes for free).
I almost never RP these days (it does happen, but its like a 0.01% chance), but I was wondering if people might be interested in reading some of my older logs.
Y'see, I've saved the logs from my best RP partner, because we thought they were really good. I even got some pics commissioned here and there of characters/events in the RPs.
But here's the thing. They tend to get... long. Like... really long. I think the longest RP that I have saved is like 500,000 words.
Here's an example of two paragraphs from one of them:
-my post-
The light on her body almost felt heavy, and soon, she almost felt strangulated by it- it was almost pressing against her skin, and she could feel her body weakening and slipping down... then... "That's enough. Nothing is happening." It was the voice of the angry old man. The box shut, and Zoe's eyes suddenly adjusted to the dim light once more. "I knew it. No sign from the goddess. You're a dead man, Tor." The old man began to laugh, but the entire room soon silenced itself as a dull roar of a moo suddenly burst forth... from Zoe!
She couldn't help herself, as she arched her back, and lay on the floor, on her knees, with her hands behind her. Something was... wrong! she could feel it in her entire being, and she felt sickness, pain, pleasure, and despair all at once building on her! Her udder hardened, her breasts throbbed and tightened, and her sex pulsed and throbbed, and then... her body's physical sensations overwhelmed her, and her moo filled the room! The men looked back at the panting cowgirl, and stared- at the bulges at the bast of her udder teats. Slowly, they expanded, filling her teats from the inside out, as milk splurted and her body reeled, and finally... she exploded in bliss.
Another moo burst from her maw as four large bullcocks suddenly sprouted from her- erupting from each of her udder nipples amidst a spray of milk. They slid out rapidly, pulsing heavily, and feeling so sensitive that they were almost numb, large, erect bull cocks, throbbing with veins under their skin. They tightened, and she could feel something within her udder changing, and then she came. Ejaculating fiercely, her cocks spurted with fresh bovine cum, and yet another moo exploded from her maw. milk glands that were still throbbing with rich, thick cream exploded from her nipplesheaths, and in an instant, everyone in the room was covered with cum or milk. In the next moment, the cultists, save for the angry old man, were on their knees, bowing and chanting to Zoe, including Tor. "I... I don't believe it!" The old man cried, then fell to his knees.
-my partner's post-
Zoe's body was trembling from the pressure, lightly shivering as she felt like she was slowly being squeezed or crushed to death until the man's voice, somewhere far away ordered the light closed. The cowslave had expected that she'd feel cold, but even with the light gone, blinking back into the darkness, even with the man's terrible laughter, the warmth continued to build inside her. It was almost painful, until suddenly, it exploded. Zoe felt a rush that forced out of her, a strange moo like none she'd ever made before exploding out of her as she felt something going on inside her. It was if the light had pooled inside her and was now rushing to burst forth. She felt pain and pleasure mingling as something, something began to happen to her udder. She moaned and arched herself, thrusting out her hips into the air as she felt a swelling down there, something was happening to her!
Pleasure throbbed through her pussy and breasts, end even her udder as suddenly she felt a strange release, and her world was awash in pleasure. Swimming in a haze of bliss, Zoe's mind was vaguely aware between the waves of ecstasy that followed of her mooing and the source of such extreme pleasure being her udder. There was weight there, a sudden increase in weight, sort of sticking out as she managed to look down and around her to see everything covered in seed and milk, four massive bullcocks proudly erect from her udder nipples. She blinked, moaning lightly as she made a mental note that the cultists were all bowing to her again.
The cowslave felt a sort of relief in that they probably wouldn't execute her now, but there was a new sense of dread considering she now had FOUR massive bovine cocks extending from her already distended udder. What the heck was she going to do with those things? Not to mention how they throbbed! The feeling of them was almost painfully good, even after the explosion of bliss she'd had, they remained proudly erect, as of to proclaim the triumph of Tor's faith, and to mock the unbelief of the angry man.
Zoe saw him fall to his knees, professing his disbelief, and the cowslave looked to Tor and the other bowing believers, and wondered just how much more complicated this was going to make things. Even if she didn't birth herms, their own ritual had proved her to be 'blessed' by their beliefs. This couldn't be good, for her or Marissa. The only thing she did know, was at least they weren't going to kill her.
As you all can see, they are QUITE long. I dunno if they can hold people's interest, or if it's even worthwhile to post them. This particular story takes place in a future world where class has divided society greatly, and each 'zone' of said city is walled off from each other. Technology and strange magics exist (though the latter are more hidden) and in the blue zone (the wealthiest zone) people experiment with all sorts of genetics. They also 'hire' people from the less fortunate zones, though the contracts basically turn these people into sex slaves. This young woman was sold in order to help her family survive, and quickly succumbed to the random gene-altering drugs that float around the blue district's slaves, causing her to transform into a cow-morph. She becomes very fertile, gets impregnated a few times, and also gets involved in all sorts of crazy storylines. The excerpts above come from a bit later in the story, after a crazy cult abducts her for their own purposes.
It is worthwhile to note that stories like this inspired pics like this one: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4394725/ which an artist friend of mine was willing to draw. Additionally... this story is rather tame, transformation wise XD. There are some crazy TF stories in my folder, lol.
ANYWAYS! what do you all think? Are these too long and huge walls of text? Are they worth posting? let me know!
I almost never RP these days (it does happen, but its like a 0.01% chance), but I was wondering if people might be interested in reading some of my older logs.
Y'see, I've saved the logs from my best RP partner, because we thought they were really good. I even got some pics commissioned here and there of characters/events in the RPs.
But here's the thing. They tend to get... long. Like... really long. I think the longest RP that I have saved is like 500,000 words.
Here's an example of two paragraphs from one of them:
-my post-
The light on her body almost felt heavy, and soon, she almost felt strangulated by it- it was almost pressing against her skin, and she could feel her body weakening and slipping down... then... "That's enough. Nothing is happening." It was the voice of the angry old man. The box shut, and Zoe's eyes suddenly adjusted to the dim light once more. "I knew it. No sign from the goddess. You're a dead man, Tor." The old man began to laugh, but the entire room soon silenced itself as a dull roar of a moo suddenly burst forth... from Zoe!
She couldn't help herself, as she arched her back, and lay on the floor, on her knees, with her hands behind her. Something was... wrong! she could feel it in her entire being, and she felt sickness, pain, pleasure, and despair all at once building on her! Her udder hardened, her breasts throbbed and tightened, and her sex pulsed and throbbed, and then... her body's physical sensations overwhelmed her, and her moo filled the room! The men looked back at the panting cowgirl, and stared- at the bulges at the bast of her udder teats. Slowly, they expanded, filling her teats from the inside out, as milk splurted and her body reeled, and finally... she exploded in bliss.
Another moo burst from her maw as four large bullcocks suddenly sprouted from her- erupting from each of her udder nipples amidst a spray of milk. They slid out rapidly, pulsing heavily, and feeling so sensitive that they were almost numb, large, erect bull cocks, throbbing with veins under their skin. They tightened, and she could feel something within her udder changing, and then she came. Ejaculating fiercely, her cocks spurted with fresh bovine cum, and yet another moo exploded from her maw. milk glands that were still throbbing with rich, thick cream exploded from her nipplesheaths, and in an instant, everyone in the room was covered with cum or milk. In the next moment, the cultists, save for the angry old man, were on their knees, bowing and chanting to Zoe, including Tor. "I... I don't believe it!" The old man cried, then fell to his knees.
-my partner's post-
Zoe's body was trembling from the pressure, lightly shivering as she felt like she was slowly being squeezed or crushed to death until the man's voice, somewhere far away ordered the light closed. The cowslave had expected that she'd feel cold, but even with the light gone, blinking back into the darkness, even with the man's terrible laughter, the warmth continued to build inside her. It was almost painful, until suddenly, it exploded. Zoe felt a rush that forced out of her, a strange moo like none she'd ever made before exploding out of her as she felt something going on inside her. It was if the light had pooled inside her and was now rushing to burst forth. She felt pain and pleasure mingling as something, something began to happen to her udder. She moaned and arched herself, thrusting out her hips into the air as she felt a swelling down there, something was happening to her!
Pleasure throbbed through her pussy and breasts, end even her udder as suddenly she felt a strange release, and her world was awash in pleasure. Swimming in a haze of bliss, Zoe's mind was vaguely aware between the waves of ecstasy that followed of her mooing and the source of such extreme pleasure being her udder. There was weight there, a sudden increase in weight, sort of sticking out as she managed to look down and around her to see everything covered in seed and milk, four massive bullcocks proudly erect from her udder nipples. She blinked, moaning lightly as she made a mental note that the cultists were all bowing to her again.
The cowslave felt a sort of relief in that they probably wouldn't execute her now, but there was a new sense of dread considering she now had FOUR massive bovine cocks extending from her already distended udder. What the heck was she going to do with those things? Not to mention how they throbbed! The feeling of them was almost painfully good, even after the explosion of bliss she'd had, they remained proudly erect, as of to proclaim the triumph of Tor's faith, and to mock the unbelief of the angry man.
Zoe saw him fall to his knees, professing his disbelief, and the cowslave looked to Tor and the other bowing believers, and wondered just how much more complicated this was going to make things. Even if she didn't birth herms, their own ritual had proved her to be 'blessed' by their beliefs. This couldn't be good, for her or Marissa. The only thing she did know, was at least they weren't going to kill her.
As you all can see, they are QUITE long. I dunno if they can hold people's interest, or if it's even worthwhile to post them. This particular story takes place in a future world where class has divided society greatly, and each 'zone' of said city is walled off from each other. Technology and strange magics exist (though the latter are more hidden) and in the blue zone (the wealthiest zone) people experiment with all sorts of genetics. They also 'hire' people from the less fortunate zones, though the contracts basically turn these people into sex slaves. This young woman was sold in order to help her family survive, and quickly succumbed to the random gene-altering drugs that float around the blue district's slaves, causing her to transform into a cow-morph. She becomes very fertile, gets impregnated a few times, and also gets involved in all sorts of crazy storylines. The excerpts above come from a bit later in the story, after a crazy cult abducts her for their own purposes.
It is worthwhile to note that stories like this inspired pics like this one: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4394725/ which an artist friend of mine was willing to draw. Additionally... this story is rather tame, transformation wise XD. There are some crazy TF stories in my folder, lol.
ANYWAYS! what do you all think? Are these too long and huge walls of text? Are they worth posting? let me know!
Three years later I've yet to write any out, have forgotten a good majority of the already few there were, and doubt I'll ever get around to doing it.
it's 1:31am so I just HAD to share that :3
yes longer posts are quite ideal, I've only had one truly good partner, she was/is a boss
*sigh*
maybe me and you can roleplay sometime. ;3
Aside from that, fantastic log, hope to hear some more... <3
though like i said, the chances of me RPing are extremely low these days :p
That subconscious thing is probably a good instinct to have. Sometimes RPs can indeed get really long, indeed- and it is rather stunning to find you've been RPing for eight hours straight. That used to happen to me all the time @.@
I would say go ahead and post them if it's something that you're proud of. We all engage in these hobbies that we do because it's fun!
I usually only put stuff online in the first place because I liked them and wanted to share.
Thank you for the advice! ^^
Too many people interested in random fuck scenes and not interested in story. That's why i tended to avoid them >.<
FS is a great game otherwise though. I have the single player bookmarked XD
Which, again sadly, is only about 15 or 16 people out of 120.
Though the length of the sample does distress me a little. If it seems too long then I worry people will just ignore the pieces because they look like huge walls of text >.<
If it's important to people to read your material then they'll read it.
I want more. The length isn't a problem if you're planning to streamline these into a story since whoever is reading is going to put in as much interest as you had put into writing it. Honestly I want more of this and people are gonna want more. You could even do a full text thing of the Weredragons you were talking about before. :)
and it ran about 14 hours i think
Jojo and I are VERY disappointed in you! We've been trying to get a hold of you and your mate to play DnD with us, but no responses.
The game is on almost permanent hiatus now! *angry phace*
Many people don't have the time (or patience sometimes, methinks) to read long stuff like that these days. It makes me wonder whether or not people will enjoy it.
Still, I'm glad you have taken an interest and are willing to read!
I should read it to:
1. Learn how to write better
2. My RPG group has become a bit stale. I need something that gets me out of it as a player and a GM. My group has become a bit too fixed on the big thrill. NPC's are ignored, characters are build with an ego and sometimes not really to fit into a group. We are playing for over 10 years now and should know better. If it keeps going like this, I may have to look for another group.
3. I also need to build up some patience again, reading longer stuff. I still have the memoirs of Giacomo Casanove to read. Thankfully in english, but well translated. So I had to read one paragraph half a dozen times to understand that he looked so far under a girls skirt to notice that she was still a virgin. 1 paragraph. 6 times. I'm speaking about 6 books with about 800 pages each written like that.
I always love to have story arcs and interesting character development go on in my RPs, which leads to the lengthy posts like the one you see here. RPing has so much more potential for enjoyment than for simple sexual scenes, in my opinion >.<
Anyways, I'm glad to see that you are interested ^^
But what about the length? do you think that people won't want to bother spending too much time to read huge ass RPs like this?
I think the quality of yours may be higher and they will be regarded as stories. My RPs have degraded because of laziness and a lack of time and ability to keep my hands out of my pants.
Personally, I skim through the story and soak up the sex, particularly when there is growth and ESPECIALLY when there's transformation.
Now, I don't intend to sell mine cause I just wanna share them, but RPs can be considered stories sometimes (When I RP I always try to create a big story) and therefore could very well be sellable.
I understand the sellers completely... though I don't think I would ever want to sell anything like that. >.< I'm too nervous about putting out 'quality stuff for payment'
That's why I don't really do writing anymore, or try to give writing gifts, even though I have an old list of stuff that I promised people >.<;;
Plus make sure to get your partner's permission, and offer them their 50% cut if they want it.
What I mean by loading up the stories on FA is when I click one to go into one it's not really viewable like a picture is. When you get to the page of the story you then have to click another link to go into the story. Kinda a pain in the butt to me.