Ok I wanna try this for Jess and maybe some of my other charas, but right now I'll just do Jess.

Jessica Hirashi

[ ] They are possessed by an angel
[ ] They are possessed by a demon
[X] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie/dragon (Saurian is a vampire)
[X] They are physically strong
[ ] They have a rare hair/fur colour (does a dark red count?)
[ ] Their eyes are an unusual colour (sapphire blue eyes)
[ ] This happens to be red
[ ] Their eyes change colour
[X] They have wings (Saurian form)
[X] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift (wings in Saurian form)
[ ] They are immortal (haven't decided)
[X] (if a female) they have large bra size (compared to the normal human bra size which I think is either a B or C)
[ ] (if a male) they are very muscular
[X] They are very attractive to the opposite gender
[ ] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[X] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc (can sense some things)
[X] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet
[X] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers (well she didn't wanna be a Saurian so kinda)
[ ] They are a healer
[X] They are from a very rich/royal family (adopted family, Luna Mei's family belonging to  Pikachu268)
[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[X] They have lost one/both of their parents (haven't decided what happens to them)
[X] They ran away from home (I say so since she attacked someone)
[ ] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[ ] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death
[ ] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature
[X] They never knew their parents (what I do since I haven't really decided on her parents yet)
[ ] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[ ] They are very attractive to the same gender
[X] They have lots of friends/no friends (lots of friends)
[ ] They are emo/cutesy
[ ] They look much younger/older than they really are. (idk does anyone think she looks older or younger than 17?)
[X] They are currently in a relationship (Stratus Wind)
[X] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: 'I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend' 'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem. (she always puts her friends and family first and acts on it but doesn't preach it)
[ ] They have a mental disorder
[ ] They have an emotional disorder
[ ] They struggle to stay sane
[ ] They are a psycho
[X] They have multiple personalities (normal and Saurian form has different personalities, she is generally shy and friendly and the Saurian part tends to be sadistic and sometimes violent and cocky)
[X] They are very intelligent (in certain subjects)
[ ] They have hallucinations
[ ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[ ] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[ ] They have a guardian spirit
[ ] They have a 'special type' of soul (no idea lol)
[ ] Their soul is not the same as them
[ ] They can talk to spirits/ghosts
[X] Some part of their body glows (eyes and have been thinking of her hands glowing when using a lot of power)
[X] They have a rare/unusual name (Hirashi isn't very common)
[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
[ ] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth
[ ] They are connected with a certain element
[ ] They are connected with a certain animal
[ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'
[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga (don't think so)
[ ] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[ ] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[ ] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[X] They are hiding from someone/something (in rps I tend to have her hide from the guy that made her a Saurian, Wrath)
[ ] They have a rare blood type
[ ] They cry blood
[ ] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
[ ] They are from a different country to where they live
[ ] They are very mysterious/dark
[X] They are very lively/happy (usually)
[ ] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[X] They are very patient
[ ] They are from a long line of (insert profession/power here)
[X] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear (blue crescent moon necklace)
[ ] They have amnesia
[ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[ ] They have a curse upon them (not an actual curse but she thinks of it as one)
[ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[ ] They are 'the chosen one'
[ ] They have insomnia

Overall points: 24

Point Reductions

Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:

[ ] They smoke
[ ] They are an alcoholic
[ ] They are overweight (does she look overweight to you?)
[ ] They are addicted to drugs
[X] They have a short temper (with some people)
[ ] They enjoy bullying others (payback doesn't count)
[ ] They do not care much about others (were you even listening to me? XD)
[ ] They are emotionless (hell no)

Final Score is: 23

<5 -Anti-Sue
Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they are scoring that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit ^^

6-15 -Balanced Character
If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.

16-25 -Borderline Mary-Sue
We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.

26< -Mary-Sue
Oh dear. Do I really need to comment on this?

Borderline, ok well no one has said she is annoying or that there is anything wrong with her so I guess I don't care about this and won't give a damn until someone tells me otherwise :) so deal with it lol