Mary sue meme
13 years ago
This looked fun so i want to try it out for Jarret
[ ] They are possessed by an angel
[ ] They are possessed by a demon
[ ] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie/dragon
[X] They are physically strong (im still curious how strong they mean but i'll put it anyway)
[ ] They have a rare hair/fur colour
[ ] Their eyes are an unusual colour
[ ] This happens to be red
[ ] Their eyes change colour
[ ] They have wings
[ ] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift
[ ] They are immortal
[ ] (if a female) they have large bra size
[ ] (if a male) they are very muscular
[X] They are very attractive to the opposite gender
[ ] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[ ] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[X] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers (Jarret's necklace allowed him to start using some magic abilities)
[ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet
[ ] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers (forced to use nanomachines to survive and work on the colony ship)
[X] They are a healer (Just enough for some first aid but he isn't going to save someone from a mortal wound )
[ ] They are from a very rich/royal family
[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[X] They have lost one/both of their parents (unfortunate, but it does happen. it's nothing special though they passed away at different times)
[ ] They ran away from home
[ ] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[X] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death. (mother was sick? guess this counts )
[ ] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature
[ ] They never knew their parents
[ ] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[X] They are very attractive to the same gender (this is getting far too true)
[ ] They have lots of friends/no friends
[ ] They are emo/cutesy
[ ] They look much younger/older than they really are.
[ ] They are currently in a relationship
[ ] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: 'I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend' 'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
[ ] They have a mental disorder
[ ] They have an emotional disorder
[ ] They struggle to stay sane
[X] They are a psycho (hmm i think head hunter and sometimes cannibal counts here XD )
[ ] They have multiple personalities
[X] They are very intelligent (This probably needs an IQ boundary because anyone can say this)
[ ] They have hallucinations
[ ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[ ] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[ ] They have a guardian spirit
[ ] They have a 'special type' of soul
[ ] Their soul is not the same as them
[ ] They can talk to spirits/ghosts
[ ] Some part of their body glows
[ ] They have a rare/unusual name (Jarrett was pretty common when i was born apparently )
[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
[ ] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth
[ ] They are connected with a certain element
[ ] They are connected with a certain animal
[ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'
[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[ ] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[X] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared (detachable head for the win :3 )
[ ] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[ ] They are hiding from someone/something
[ ] They have a rare blood type
[ ] They cry blood
[ ] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
[ ] They are from a different country to where they live
[ ] They are very mysterious/dark (no he's pretty open about everything he does)
[ ] They are very lively/happy
[ ] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[ ] They are very patient
[ ] They are from a long line of (insert profession/power here)
[X] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear (the necklace that keeps his head on :) )
[ ] They have amnesia
[X] They have some sort of permanent medical condition (does a detachable head count? )
[X] They have a curse upon them (necklace's curse of detachable head, this is showing up a lot huh?)
[ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[ ] They are 'the chosen one'
[ ] They have insomnia
Overall points: 13
Point Reductions
Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:
[X] They smoke
[X] They are an alcoholic
[ ] They are overweight
[ ] They are addicted to drugs, sex
[ ] They have a short temper
[ ] They enjoy bullying others
[ ] They do not care much about others (the usual cat persona, though I do care its easy to let go if the situation changes)
[ ] They are emotionless
Final Score is: 11
<5 -Anti-Sue Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they are scoring that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit ^^
6-15 -Balanced Character If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.
16-25 -Borderline Mary-Sue We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.
26< -Mary-Sue Oh dear. Do I really need to comment on this?
Well seems some things can add up quick. so i kind of figured i wasn't going to pamper him anyway :P
[ ] They are possessed by an angel
[ ] They are possessed by a demon
[ ] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie/dragon
[X] They are physically strong (im still curious how strong they mean but i'll put it anyway)
[ ] They have a rare hair/fur colour
[ ] Their eyes are an unusual colour
[ ] This happens to be red
[ ] Their eyes change colour
[ ] They have wings
[ ] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift
[ ] They are immortal
[ ] (if a female) they have large bra size
[ ] (if a male) they are very muscular
[X] They are very attractive to the opposite gender
[ ] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[ ] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[X] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers (Jarret's necklace allowed him to start using some magic abilities)
[ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet
[ ] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers (forced to use nanomachines to survive and work on the colony ship)
[X] They are a healer (Just enough for some first aid but he isn't going to save someone from a mortal wound )
[ ] They are from a very rich/royal family
[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[X] They have lost one/both of their parents (unfortunate, but it does happen. it's nothing special though they passed away at different times)
[ ] They ran away from home
[ ] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[X] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death. (mother was sick? guess this counts )
[ ] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature
[ ] They never knew their parents
[ ] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[X] They are very attractive to the same gender (this is getting far too true)
[ ] They have lots of friends/no friends
[ ] They are emo/cutesy
[ ] They look much younger/older than they really are.
[ ] They are currently in a relationship
[ ] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: 'I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend' 'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
[ ] They have a mental disorder
[ ] They have an emotional disorder
[ ] They struggle to stay sane
[X] They are a psycho (hmm i think head hunter and sometimes cannibal counts here XD )
[ ] They have multiple personalities
[X] They are very intelligent (This probably needs an IQ boundary because anyone can say this)
[ ] They have hallucinations
[ ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[ ] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[ ] They have a guardian spirit
[ ] They have a 'special type' of soul
[ ] Their soul is not the same as them
[ ] They can talk to spirits/ghosts
[ ] Some part of their body glows
[ ] They have a rare/unusual name (Jarrett was pretty common when i was born apparently )
[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
[ ] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth
[ ] They are connected with a certain element
[ ] They are connected with a certain animal
[ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'
[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[ ] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[X] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared (detachable head for the win :3 )
[ ] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[ ] They are hiding from someone/something
[ ] They have a rare blood type
[ ] They cry blood
[ ] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
[ ] They are from a different country to where they live
[ ] They are very mysterious/dark (no he's pretty open about everything he does)
[ ] They are very lively/happy
[ ] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[ ] They are very patient
[ ] They are from a long line of (insert profession/power here)
[X] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear (the necklace that keeps his head on :) )
[ ] They have amnesia
[X] They have some sort of permanent medical condition (does a detachable head count? )
[X] They have a curse upon them (necklace's curse of detachable head, this is showing up a lot huh?)
[ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[ ] They are 'the chosen one'
[ ] They have insomnia
Overall points: 13
Point Reductions
Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:
[X] They smoke
[X] They are an alcoholic
[ ] They are overweight
[ ] They are addicted to drugs, sex
[ ] They have a short temper
[ ] They enjoy bullying others
[ ] They do not care much about others (the usual cat persona, though I do care its easy to let go if the situation changes)
[ ] They are emotionless
Final Score is: 11
<5 -Anti-Sue Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they are scoring that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit ^^
6-15 -Balanced Character If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.
16-25 -Borderline Mary-Sue We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.
26< -Mary-Sue Oh dear. Do I really need to comment on this?
Well seems some things can add up quick. so i kind of figured i wasn't going to pamper him anyway :P
[X] They are physically strong (she has been running and exercising all her life)
[X] They are very attractive to the opposite gender
[X] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc (she can tell when her closest friends are in danger)
[X] They are a healer (it was a high school requirement for all students to know enough first aid to keep someone alive until the medics arrived)
[X] They are from a very rich/royal family
[X] They have lots of friends/no friends (easy to make friends when you are a secret billionaire)
[X] They are very intelligent (This probably needs an IQ boundary because anyone can say this)
[X] They are connected with a certain animal (wolf)
[X] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood (taur)
[X] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared (modular)
[X] They are very lively/happy
[X] They are very patient
[X] They are from a long line of (inventors)
[X] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear (nothing special, just a coin necklace she has had on since she was little)
[X] They have some sort of permanent medical condition (modular?)