Today is my birthday _{[shut up Lisa, no one cares about that]} and I was just wondering if any of you would do me a favor. That favor? Just... Critique some of my writing - http://thewrittenspectator.weebly.com -. Please? The only comments I ever get on my writing are "This is good! More!" and... That doesn't help me. So... For today, I would like some real, constructive and thoughtful critiques. Please, tear my writing to shreds.



I mean, you don't have to if you won't want to. I just thought I might ask. And... Yeah. Sorry to bother everyone. Bye now.