Wanna read the 1st 3 chapters of "The Incredible Hare"?
13 years ago
They're on my JoeStrike website at
http://www.joestrike.com/IHare_ch1-3.html
I just started a thread on the FA Forums Writers' Critique page asking for feedback. If you want to check the thread, here's a link to it:
http://tinyurl.com/95n22go
Just as a reminder, this is the kids'/furs' novel version of a TV series I've yet to get off the ground. In the TV show his origin is explained in the opening title sequence beginning here:
but the book goes into a bit more detail about How It All Began...
http://www.joestrike.com/IHare_ch1-3.html
I just started a thread on the FA Forums Writers' Critique page asking for feedback. If you want to check the thread, here's a link to it:
http://tinyurl.com/95n22go
Just as a reminder, this is the kids'/furs' novel version of a TV series I've yet to get off the ground. In the TV show his origin is explained in the opening title sequence beginning here:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/6120223/but the book goes into a bit more detail about How It All Began...
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I can't say I've ever perused the FA forums more than once since I joined here. A more direct way to get some critique would be to copy-paste the text here, or just make a link to it and have the viewer comment here.
Or something. How are you doing?