MARY SUENESS
13 years ago
HEY BROSKI
Okay, this will be interesting considering I'm making it about my character/murrsona thing and it's sort of based off of me really fookin closely. ANYHOO
[ ] They are possessed by an angel [
[ ] They are possessed by a demon [AVE SANTINI]
[ ] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie
[X] They are physically strong [Well... yeah. He gets wore out after a while but he loves swimming like I do.]
[ ] They have a rare hair/fur colour
[ ] Their eyes are an unusual colour
[ ] This happens to be red
[ ] Their eyes change color
[ ] They have wings
[ ] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift [I thought this said GLOW XD]
[ ] They are immortal [snerk]
[ ] (if a female) they have large bra size [TRIP-DEEZ]
[X] (if a male) they are very muscular [err, muscular arms. Not really excessively]
[x] They are very attractive to the opposite gender [moderately... not as much as i'd like]
[ ] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[ ] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[ ] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet
[ ] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[ ] They are a healer
[ ] They are from a very rich/royal family
[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[ ] They have lost one/both of their parents
[ ] They ran away from home
[ ] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[ ] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death
[ ] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature
[ ] They never knew their parents
[X] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[X] They are very attractive to the same gender (lol... this is... yeah it's true)
[x] They have lots of friends/no friends (quite a few friends in different circles :3 )
[ ]They are emo/cutesy
[ ] They look much younger/older than they really are
[x] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: 'I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend' 'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem. (not constantly saying them out loud, but if asked he'll clarify them, and he has strong feelings on many subjects)
[ ] They have a mental disorder
[X] They have an emotional disorder (PTSD)
[ ] They struggle to stay sane (whelp)
[ ] They are a psycho
[ ] They have multiple personalities
[x] They are very intelligent sometimes [IQ is measured well over median...]
[X] They have hallucinations [Flashiebacks]
[ ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc
[ ] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[ ] They have a guardian spirit
[ ] They have a 'special type' of soul
[ ] Their soul is not the same as them
[ ] They can talk to spirits/ghosts
[ ] Some part of their body glows [OH WELL THERE WE GO]
[X] They have a rare/unusual name (Euripydes? lol that's only a once in a lifetime name)
[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc (COLUMBUS DAY!)
[ ] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth
[X] They are connected with a certain element (water seems to be around a lot)
[X] They are connected with a certain animal (Fustercluck of animals )
[ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'
[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[ ] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[ ] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[ ] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[ ] They are hiding from someone/something
[] They have a rare blood type
[ ] They cry blood
[X] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown [lol uhh... just the nervous breakdown]
[ ] They are from a different country to where they live
[ ] They are very mysterious/dark
[ ] They are very lively/happy
[ ] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[ ] They are very patient
[ ] They are from a long line of [insert profession/power here]
[X] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear (MY FOSH)
[ ] They have amnesia
[ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[ ] The have a curse upon them
[ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[ ] They are 'the chosen one'
[] They have insomnia
Overall points: 15
Point Reductions
Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:
[ ] They smoke (only weed)
[X] They are an alcoholic (well, he drinks... though not to the excess... often... OKAY ITS BEEN 2 WEEKS SINCE I HAD BOOZE)
[ ] They are overweight
[] They are addicted to drugs (not addicted, but he likes a puff on the bong every now and again ;)
[X] They have a short temper
[ ] They enjoy bullying others
[ ] They do not care much about others
[ ] They are emotionless
Final Score is: 13
<5 -Anti-Sue
Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they are scoring that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit ^^
6-15 -Balanced Character
If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.
16-25 -Borderline Mary-Sue
We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.
26< -Mary-Sue
Oh dear. Do I really need to comment on this?
[ ] They are possessed by an angel [
[ ] They are possessed by a demon [AVE SANTINI]
[ ] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie
[X] They are physically strong [Well... yeah. He gets wore out after a while but he loves swimming like I do.]
[ ] They have a rare hair/fur colour
[ ] Their eyes are an unusual colour
[ ] This happens to be red
[ ] Their eyes change color
[ ] They have wings
[ ] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift [I thought this said GLOW XD]
[ ] They are immortal [snerk]
[ ] (if a female) they have large bra size [TRIP-DEEZ]
[X] (if a male) they are very muscular [err, muscular arms. Not really excessively]
[x] They are very attractive to the opposite gender [moderately... not as much as i'd like]
[ ] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[ ] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[ ] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet
[ ] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[ ] They are a healer
[ ] They are from a very rich/royal family
[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[ ] They have lost one/both of their parents
[ ] They ran away from home
[ ] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[ ] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death
[ ] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature
[ ] They never knew their parents
[X] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[X] They are very attractive to the same gender (lol... this is... yeah it's true)
[x] They have lots of friends/no friends (quite a few friends in different circles :3 )
[ ]They are emo/cutesy
[ ] They look much younger/older than they really are
[x] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: 'I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend' 'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem. (not constantly saying them out loud, but if asked he'll clarify them, and he has strong feelings on many subjects)
[ ] They have a mental disorder
[X] They have an emotional disorder (PTSD)
[ ] They struggle to stay sane (whelp)
[ ] They are a psycho
[ ] They have multiple personalities
[x] They are very intelligent sometimes [IQ is measured well over median...]
[X] They have hallucinations [Flashiebacks]
[ ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc
[ ] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[ ] They have a guardian spirit
[ ] They have a 'special type' of soul
[ ] Their soul is not the same as them
[ ] They can talk to spirits/ghosts
[ ] Some part of their body glows [OH WELL THERE WE GO]
[X] They have a rare/unusual name (Euripydes? lol that's only a once in a lifetime name)
[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc (COLUMBUS DAY!)
[ ] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth
[X] They are connected with a certain element (water seems to be around a lot)
[X] They are connected with a certain animal (Fustercluck of animals )
[ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'
[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[ ] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[ ] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[ ] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[ ] They are hiding from someone/something
[] They have a rare blood type
[ ] They cry blood
[X] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown [lol uhh... just the nervous breakdown]
[ ] They are from a different country to where they live
[ ] They are very mysterious/dark
[ ] They are very lively/happy
[ ] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[ ] They are very patient
[ ] They are from a long line of [insert profession/power here]
[X] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear (MY FOSH)
[ ] They have amnesia
[ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[ ] The have a curse upon them
[ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[ ] They are 'the chosen one'
[] They have insomnia
Overall points: 15
Point Reductions
Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:
[ ] They smoke (only weed)
[X] They are an alcoholic (well, he drinks... though not to the excess... often... OKAY ITS BEEN 2 WEEKS SINCE I HAD BOOZE)
[ ] They are overweight
[] They are addicted to drugs (not addicted, but he likes a puff on the bong every now and again ;)
[X] They have a short temper
[ ] They enjoy bullying others
[ ] They do not care much about others
[ ] They are emotionless
Final Score is: 13
<5 -Anti-Sue
Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they are scoring that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit ^^
6-15 -Balanced Character
If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.
16-25 -Borderline Mary-Sue
We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.
26< -Mary-Sue
Oh dear. Do I really need to comment on this?
"They cry blood"
Is this something common? Is this really, like, a pandemic among poorly-written characters? I don't even.