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What do you hate about bedfellows?
13 years ago
Answer any, or all, of the following questions. Post unnecessarily long comments about your opinions, and be sure to troll and flame.
What pisses you off about bedfellows the most?
What do you find the most disappointing about the series?
What do you think is the worst Episode of the series so far and why?
What would you have done differently if you were in charge of the series?
.... If you say you hate nothing about it, your a damn liar.
What pisses you off about bedfellows the most?
What do you find the most disappointing about the series?
What do you think is the worst Episode of the series so far and why?
What would you have done differently if you were in charge of the series?
.... If you say you hate nothing about it, your a damn liar.
Boyo, I should slap you.
With a fish.
use sandman >:3
And that v
This soooo hard!
The lack of new episodes :L
i cant say it was the worst but in my opinion the one i liked the least was the first one at work mainly because i just hate those stupid phone moments and wonder how the hell he got home that fast ( yes i lack imagination lol)
nothing done differently
what pisses me off .... WHY THE HELL DIDNT THAT BITCH DANCE ON A POLL YET!?!!? ? (pretty much it )
some of the newer episodes just seemed to have a weird vibe and never got properly funny? I can't put my finger on just what though.
What pisses me off the most, is probably the lack of episodes and short length. While it is intensive work to do animation, I'd like it to be something that could rival more mainstream Shows, or could be featured on Adultswim with ease.
If I was in charge: I'd have outsourced it to Korean Sweat Factories. like a boss.
"Keys" is my least favourite so far, because I don't like rap.
If I was in charge of the series, I'd probably ruin it because I'm no good with animation or scripted comedy.
2.we want new episodes
3.your behavior is lacking
in animation like Mom's B day
Sheen swears and got a grumpy attitude.
What do you find the most disappointing about the series: Fatigue dosent get beat enough
What do you think is the worst Episode of the series so far and why: The one where Fatigues friend got beat and not Fatigue himself
What would you have done differently if you were in charge of the series: Beat Fatigue more
lol, other then that I love it, wish more episodes would come out but thats about it.
Answer 2) I am very pleased with the videos.
Answer 3)The Mother's day episode since it was only a phone call. (It was still a great video, it just could have been a lot more)
Answer 4) I wouldn't change anything. You got everything working for you at the moment.
I hope I wasn't too criticizing.
that's about it. also language isn't a concern here. do what feels right in the end, if it means sheen cussing and making sexual innuendo, do it.
Disappointment comes from the story lines not cut quick enough. The scenes need to be shorter and faster (in TV/Movies now-a-days it's all about quick, quick, quick).
The first of the series sucked because it was new... that's growing pains big deal the rest only get better!
I would make better stories with a little better endings. The endings seem not to deliver a REALLY funny ending. They should be different from the rest of the story. The last episode with the fainting goat ended with the goat *spoiler alert* passing out for good. Where maybe he could have scared them to a point they ran out thru a wall screaming. It gives the ending a different story line. Or you could also do a lead up which Sienfield did very well with stories they blended together at the end. Here is a quick sample of lead up:
Someone is jerking off and at the same time someone is making dinner, but leaves the gas on by mistake so the house fills with gas. So the one jerking off goes faster and faster until BOOM!
Start a funny piece then add to it, the more writers minds that get put in the better the story will expand. Someone might say, "Okay he's jerking and there is gas. So what if one of the characters mom's comes to visit at the same time. " etc... etc...
That the first ep got deleted.
What do you find the most disappointing about the series?
That Fatigue's voice was replaced.
What do you think is the worst Episode of the series so far and why?
Gary. It wasn't really that funny.
What would you have done differently if you were in charge of the series?
Moar buttsex.
abusive relationship theme
2. What do you find the most disappointing about the series?
abusive relationship theme
3. What do you think is the worst Episode of the series so far and why?
mother's day phone message
4. What would you have done differently if you were in charge of the series?
I actually do enjoy this series and the new voice acting and I understand the abusive relationship aspect is presented 'over the top' as a way of generating humor much like the 3 stooges and some Laural and Hardy shows used to do (yes I am old).
If I were in charge I don't think I would change the dynamic of the theme but at least show once in a while that Sheen does in fact return Fatigue's love.
Either way, keep up the good work and I look forward to more episodes.
Trust in yourself
If there's anything I can say, I think the delivery of your jokes is much better in your comics; I find them a lot funnier than the animations. The animations are not bad! Just your comics are better, IMO.
Cheers!
YES I know that defines his character and I am fully aware you can't just remove that without shutting down the series.
But, even though his personality is funny, sometimes it goes more toward offensive/depressing.
For example, Sheen constantly beating the crap out of Fatigue kinda gets old after a while.
For me it comes down to the difference between abusive humor and just abusive.
As far as the frequency of episodes is concerned, that seems to be the biggest pet peeve of everyone.
I guess I'm not that addicted to the show so I don't really wane waiting for new episodes.
Overall I still enjoy the series and probably won't get burned out on my erks with the show any time soon.
>:T
As for the animation, the only thing I dislike is the audio.
But it has improved very well, episode by episode, so good progress~
YOU KNOW WHAT! I'M GOING TO WRITE ONE AND THEN GIVE IT TO YOU! SO THERE!
Most disappointing, I find is the lack of identification that Fatigue and Sheen are a gay couple, the purpose of which probably being to attract a larger audience, which I see as rather sensible.
In my opinion, the least appealing episode is the one titled "Mothers Day", which is for a total of three reasons. First, you misspelled "Mothers' Day", which is really just a small detail that I really shouldn't even consider. Secondly, although the title suggests the topic contained, within the video there is insufficient background information, which weakens the point of your video due to a lack of coherence and organization, but nonetheless you pulled it off rather well by using that little note at the end. On a final note it probably would've made more sense if Fatigue called his mother instead of the other way around, although if it were so the video would've been radically different.
To tell you the truth, you're doing just fine running this operation, and if I were doing this I would be doing a MUCH worse job than you could imagine be cause I SUCK at everything artsy.
I absolutely love the series, and trust me, you can only look up if you want to go there. So if you want to get better, why not ask what people like the most about the series? It'll definite;y open your eyes by seeing both sides of the equation, and it'll help you feel more stable on the matter of knowing what to and what not to put in. Then by adding a few twists and tweaks here and there, I'm sure you'll soar to new places.
Thank you for your time and consideration,
Poke.hub
*Sighs* And why is it so hard to find honesty these days?
Hmm...I would have to say "Don't Touch My Stuff" is the one I watch less o,o so I guess that is the one I don't care as much for, it just doesn't feel like a normal episode
I haven't found flaws yet, maybe a little audio video sync tweak would work but it is all awesome otherwise
I wouldn't be able to change anything XD I could write a little but I have no clue how to animate
and not enough gay sex! XC
but every one think fatigue is a girl is really annoying, and even though its not your fault.......i blame you >:C
The, "My Little Donkey" one connected the most... To many Bronies. D:
other than that, i have no complaints!
But in short, I really, really, really hate the fans.
As for the comic, it's not perfect, but it's alright. A lot better than similar shit out there.
Kidding, shows grand other than the coloring... Seems super retro, outdated, wuteva you wanna say.
I hate how the characters in your animations seem to only have five frames worth of mouth movement. Variety is key.
1 not enough sex/gay/penis jokes
2 not enough damn episodes
3 the least worst one is keys keys keys, but you already know it, that shit went viral
4 nothing, this is what the beginning of a show should be like, dare i say better then most
Brevity is the soul of wit.
Also, here's an experiment.... try listening to a music track... maybe something by an orchestra, and imagine what sort of cartoon would fit it.
As a fan of Family Guy, I have seen less new original material as the seasons drag onward (some episodes in S10 are pretty funny IMHO), thereby turning it into just another lazy animation, with humour spiraling down into the toilet pretty fast. At this point, Seth's creativity may as well just up and left, y'know?
The same thing applies to The Simpsons as well - although I tend to let that slide, since the series has surpassed 500 episodes, plus Homer keeps me laughing, since he always finds new ways to make an ass of himself.
And now he's going to make a Flintstones show. I may be sick.
...
God, I miss my dog....
A Flintstones show, you say? Well, look on the bright side. At least Seth MacFarlane fares better than M.Night Shyamalan and Uwe Boll (whom is planning to direct a Fallout movie, btw).
> Fallout
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No.
Fucking NO.
I will not tolerate this. *writes letter to Bethesda*
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bedfellows
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I need ALL the bedfellows D:
And not enough sex.
I love it anyway XD
The series is too bland - there's a huge lack of background music, the colours are minimal and have no contrast, there is very little to no plot, and the jokes are pretty lame and far too repetitive. Call me old-fashioned if you like, but in the time that I grew up in the 1990's watching animated shorts, I've heard music playing, there's plenty of colour, contrast, and shading, and there had been plot on a lot of them. In a few animated shorts however, such as Doodlez, the colours are more minimal (limited to just black and white), but the amount of humour lies aplenty in it. Plus a hand comes up every now and then to draw something onboard, and bam.
There is, however, one episode of Bedfellows that I do like, but that still doesn't make me a fan of the series.
That and the infrequency of the eppisodes BRIBE YOUR ANIMATOR :D That and Sheens leaning too close to "wife beater" now >_<
2. May be the length of each clip allays wish there was more :P
3.Keys mother fucker funny yes but just didn't strike me
4. derp?
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I hope that shows up
VORE or GTFO.
I'd say the lack of variety. I want more! There isn't enough!
Plots seem to drag on with long heavy sentences. The comics were quick and snappy, abut the animations seem to be bogged down with words.
Not enough visible penis.
> Answer any, or all, of the following questions. Post unnecessarily long comments about your opinions,
> and be sure to troll and flame.
OK, I take this as an invitation for critique.
> What pisses you off about bedfellows the most?
That "Just Give Him 10 Minutes" got taken down. I can understand you being embarassed
about it being an "early work", your voice acting skills, or some such bullshit, but it's really
funny regardless. Besides, the voices were really you and Fatigue, not that smooth imitator,
Chip. (Don't get me wrong, Chip does a bang-up job, which if it frees you up to concentrate
on what you do best, is for the better.)
> What do you find the most disappointing about the series?
Well, the release rate of new episodes, as others have mentioned. Get to work, ya lazy bum!
Or enlist collaborators.
And he looks good in pink.
> What do you think is the worst Episode of the series so far and why?
Schlüssel Schlüssel Schlüssel... in meinen Hosen.
(umm, no, I actually enjoyed that one too much.)
Probably "Gary", it was a little weak on plot. Plot, I tell you, PLOT!
> What would you have done differently if you were in charge of the series?
Hmm... have more side characters more often. Sheen's dad and Fatigue's mom are a good start,
and of course Gary, but these guys must have more friends than that. And maybe a queer uncle
(or aunt) or two.
> .... If you say you hate nothing about it, your a damn liar.
Yeah, take everything I say with a grain of salt.
That Fatigue doesn't get enough chances to pwn Sheen back. In the comics he seems to do more things to win over Sheen. I'd like to see that happen in the animated series.
What do you find the most disappointing about the series?
Don't really have any.
What do you think is the worst Episode of the series so far and why?
Probably the mother's day episode. I just thought it was a bit nonsensical for Sheen to get upset about him leaving a message and would have picked another vehicle to transition into the sounds of the abuse. Maybe Sheen going berserk that Fatigue had done his laundry again.
What would you have done differently if you were in charge of the series?
I'd even out the give and take of abuse a bit more.
Anyway, keep up the good work!
Hmmm....
Well.
My answer to that is:
The Fact that you decided to be such a self-loathing sh*t and gave us NOTHING to hate about it. The Animation is incredible and the humor standard and acceptable, and it's a deviation from what you originally did, and it worked out for the better, because you're doing your own damned thing and not giving two sh*ts about the opinions of damn near every furry out there who've always expected you to be the artist whose art they could get their rocks off to.