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About Elissa & Betty...

13 years ago General

premise- A teen comedy with two goth teens in a high school and a neighborhood ...

Format: webcomic strips

What do you consider necessary, engaging and fun to include more?

- Something of fantasy and magic?
- Some minor characters?
- asshole antagonists like bullys and some dangerous villain?
- Ponees?... http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hOecfzan_hg
- Betty's thong? (read this as fanservice)
-anything else?... say something!!

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44 Comments

faust11 ~faust11

PrOn Artist

13 years ago

Pending if you want things to be humorous or, just a weekly episodic strip with teen drama. I'd say minor characters work, possibly antagonist.

S-L-B ~s-l-b

Tired

13 years ago

yeah, Humorous.

rogray ~rogray

Watcher

13 years ago

- Some minor characters?
- asshole antagonists like bullys and some dangerous villain?

1) What's a teen drama without some more characters to help flesh out Elissa & Betty? It would be damn, and I mean damn hilarious if they actually were friends with say the queen bee cheerleader. Oh noes, the natural enemies are friends!
2) As with any teen drama, there's always a bully. A simple fact of life. Someone is always a bully. I'm thinking some nouveau riche jerkass who has to wear the best clothes and the best food. And in conjunction with my first suggestion, chastises the cheerleader for demeaning herself by associating with the "emos."

S-L-B ~s-l-b

Tired

13 years ago

as Fantasy stuff i was thinking make them learning some witchcraft with help of some character :)

rogray ~rogray

Watcher

13 years ago

That's good.

Doomington ~doomington

PrOn Artist

13 years ago

- Something of fantasy and magic? - This could be cool, though I guess it depends on how you do it. I have always been fond of the fantasy-made-mundane thing, where monsters and enchanted creatures are just part of the everyday world, and you can see them living day to day like normal folks.
- Some minor characters? - A definite, and a fun way to bring back or reinvent old characters you could never find use for.
- asshole antagonists like bullys and some dangerous villain? - This would be cool, but it depends on the direction you intend to go. For a series of shorter comedy stories, a dangerous villain might not work as well as a comedic nemesis.
- Betty's thong? (read this as fanservice) - Yes please!
-anything else?... say something!! - I have been really happy to see these two pop up as much as they have, and am very much looking forward to seeing where you take them from here.

Darkronin21 ~darkronin21

Writer

13 years ago

I'd say that the Minor Characters, assholes and Antagonists, and Fanservice would all be very welcome in the comic. Magic and such that's sort of take it or leave it. I think it could be good with it or without it. And as for Ponees.... Only if they're in some sort of slapstick, Wile E. Coyote disaster... and constantly

Royal_Starlord ~royalstarlord

Art Whore

13 years ago

Pff, maybe make it cannon that things get stuck to her wherever she sits. :3

kefka989 ~kefka989

Watcher

13 years ago

Possible sodomy?

S-L-B ~s-l-b

Tired

13 years ago

they private life is irrelevant here.

kefka989 ~kefka989

Watcher

13 years ago

ahhh

kyrogue23 ~kyrogue23

13 years ago

- Something of fantasy and magic?That would be a good thing to see and make it more funny.
- Some minor characters? another good idea
- asshole antagonists like bullys and some dangerous villain? Villians would be great addition
- Ponees?... http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hOecfzan_hg Have no clue your choice.
- Betty's thong? (read this as fanservice) For god sakes please show it
-anything else?... say something!! Add cameos of some of your other OCs

Webslinger86 ~webslinger86

Anthro Artist

13 years ago

Do Anthony you want, but Betty's thong sounds hot

Danies ~danies

Digital Artist

13 years ago

Todos me parecen válidos, el tercero me interesó un poco más, pero todos pueden ser interesantes.

S-L-B ~s-l-b

Tired

13 years ago

¿hasta Ponys?... siempre se puede meter a un demonio de Jersey, que es como un caballo demoniaco, y asi se matan dos pajaros de un tiro junto con lo tercero, jar jaa.

Danies ~danies

Digital Artist

13 years ago

Jajaj, y por qué no? (:

S-L-B ~s-l-b

Tired

13 years ago

Todo vale :9

goldenavatar ~goldenavatar

Traditional Artist

13 years ago

Well, I can't wait to see what you eventually make.

MKbuster ~mkbuster

Art Whore

13 years ago

S-L-B ~s-l-b

Tired

13 years ago

some hearts to put in that?

MKbuster ~mkbuster

Art Whore

13 years ago

yes cause I love them lol

but yea you got it down right ^ ^
I do like the idea them learning magic
many funny and mischievous moments to be had in that ;p

S-L-B ~s-l-b

Tired

13 years ago

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eS1XaTfyTKM

MKbuster ~mkbuster

Art Whore

13 years ago

They sure have~ | D

Smashmael ~valnyr

Anthro Artist

13 years ago

Demons

S-L-B ~s-l-b

Tired

13 years ago

i couldn't resist: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NKDD-qxIhuM

CheezyWEAPON ~cheezyweapon

PrOn Artist

13 years ago

I'm all for the asshole antagonists.

Maybe a pair of (mad) scientists that try to debunk all that magicery.

Just have it all cute girls!

S-L-B ~s-l-b

Tired

13 years ago

a bit of righteous black magic is on Elissa & Betty's side :) http://www.furaffinity.net/view/9384599/

quelico ~quelico

PrOn Artist

13 years ago

I wanna see them get into trouble! If they're in high school, I can imagine some fun high school antics they'd get themselves into!

S-L-B ~s-l-b

Tired

13 years ago

yes!

ravecrow23-a ~ravecrow23-a

Photographer

13 years ago

Hmmmmmmmmm...a asshole protagonist....hmmmm can't through in my satanist ex friend he'd really screw up the script...

ravecrow23-a ~ravecrow23-a

Photographer

13 years ago

Throw*gahh stupid ipoop!!!

S-L-B ~s-l-b

Tired

13 years ago

Hahaa!

ravecrow23-a ~ravecrow23-a

Photographer

13 years ago

Goddamit iPod...one day I will have my computer back..and then.......I'll search for porn..hehehehe

S-L-B ~s-l-b

Tired

13 years ago

very well

ravecrow23-a ~ravecrow23-a

Photographer

13 years ago

Sorry...it sucks having a 8 gig when you could have a bajillion gig

circus ~circus

Anthro Artist

13 years ago

They're kinda begging for their own sorta demon slaying or vampire hunting or something story. but I'd kinda like it if there were demons and things around but they just wanted to fit in!

Or maybe Elissa and Betty are the only humans at their school...

Lyon665 ~lyon665

Photographer

13 years ago

If it's a highschool setting and you want to put in villains, how about evil preppy girls? Or jealous evil nerdy chicks! Oooh, jack-ass principle!

JeremySkunk ~jeremyskunk

Anthro Artist

13 years ago

I find it hard to believe being forced around an ass like hers doesn't turn damned near any pair of underwear into a thong pretty quickly.

Um yes. Any of those would be quite welcome. I think a short comic involving Elissa and Betty getting harassed by bullies, then going home and using magic to get even with hilarious consequences would be great.

Aeolus06 ~aeolus06

Digital Artist

13 years ago

All of the above! XD except for the ponies and asshole bullies

S-L-B ~s-l-b

Tired

13 years ago

Bully Ponies, hahaa.

nillaman ~nillaman

13 years ago

I second this lack of bully ponies.

Aeolus06 ~aeolus06

Digital Artist

13 years ago

And also maybe a nerdy male character friend of the protagonists.

S-L-B ~s-l-b

Tired

13 years ago

always works, i think. And i like it :)

Artsy08 ~artsy08

Traditional Artist

13 years ago

I don't think magic should be involved.

I have an idea though, their next door neighbors are a happy couple like the Beavers or the Bradys or a cliche 50-60's family and they're always happy and never get angry no matter what happens. But Elissa and Betty HATE them (like they're annoyed with them).\

Maybe there should also be a nerdy boy who tries to win Betty's heart, I'm just throwing that out there.

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