What I do when I have things like this is sorta just look at it like if you can edit it to be a serious thing without really messing it up do so.
But if it'd be something difficult to edit keep it as is.

At the moment, there's just one panel that is the deciding factor. if i leave it in, it continues down the dirty path, if i change it, it can be serious. So im much indeed right as crossroads. lol

Oh wow...lol
Hm. Well...I think you should do what you think you like better. I dunno, if you're in it for the popularity you can just go the obvious-pornographic-way.

True. I think i'll experiemnt with bith anbd upload the version i fins lacking into my scraps.

Cool.
I look forward to seeing whatever you do come up with.

I strongly suggest you make both. Certainly you could copy the leadup to the deciding point and tweek it.

I suppose, if naything ill put the naught version in scraps if it seems forced. To say, hey...i tried XD

I say dirty.

Taken into consideration ^^

I don't really like either of those pokemons.

Different strokes for different folks

Let it stay in this way, but please upload in in several pages that match the size of an normal page, its much more usefull than. After all if you let it in this way the viewer can use his imagination much more AND , the of course important part: You cant do more Comissions if you spend your time with that
Sry but im so exited to see my newest one

Yes yes, i ahvent forgotten ^^

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/9506804/ is all I have to say about that x3

lol makes me almost want to watch the movie...but then i remember the english dubbing and think again XD

It's generally been my experience that with any porn fiction, a lot of the non-dick non-vag bits get entirely skipped over by readers who don't care about being nice to the artist (i.e. the average reader). If you want the non-porn bits to matter, you have to pull off a lot of master-storytelling, it-REALLY-matters-to-the-sex bullshit. Or make the characters REALLY charming outside of the sex. Which is another aspect of master-storytelling, it-REALLY-matters-to-the-sex bullshit.

You might as well just go straight for the herp-derp route from the get-go, IMHO.

Very valid points lol.

Sucks because i'm a pretty terrible writer heh.