All people how see this read this please!!!
17 years ago
General
So i was watching TV and stuff and i saw some thing making fun of Nazis and stuff and out of no were it hit me like a ton of bricks I will make a world war two story read the intro below to tell me what you think. Also i know the war ended way before this point but if you read the hole thing you will under stand. (Its as thou we lost on D-day and stuff still thinking every thing) Feed back people feed back. also i may put it up on the site to see what others think of my idea but you get to see it first please look.
It was a cold night we could hear the bombs off in the distance. They were getting closer we had not found a safe place. After the Allies failed on D-day and Hitler got designs for the A-bomb we all knew it was over, but we never stop fighting never. The year, what was it again oh yes that’s right 1973 all most 40 years after the war started it hasn’t ended. After D-day Hitler took all of Europe that is all but Russia and part of Grate Britten. I don’t even know if that’s true any more. Me I was hiding out with my lover we most have been some where in Maine. Hitler said he would take the sea cost by the end of Fall to months away. I don’t even think it will take that long. He is bent on killing all that aren’t part of his perfect race. Cal and I have been running ever scene we got off the boat in Portland we thought it would be safe. It seems we had beaten the Nazis there by about 12 hours that’s, that’s when there were six of us. Now all that remains are me and Cal. We lost Mikhail the first night we got to Portland he died giving us time to run, than we lost Sara, and Terry a week latter at a refuge camp. After that we didn’t stay at refuge camps there only bigger targets. Then we lost Jade today, I just got back from burying her outside. We where going to find a safe place to live, were there was no war where we could live in peace. I wont stop till me and Cal find that place.
It was a cold night we could hear the bombs off in the distance. They were getting closer we had not found a safe place. After the Allies failed on D-day and Hitler got designs for the A-bomb we all knew it was over, but we never stop fighting never. The year, what was it again oh yes that’s right 1973 all most 40 years after the war started it hasn’t ended. After D-day Hitler took all of Europe that is all but Russia and part of Grate Britten. I don’t even know if that’s true any more. Me I was hiding out with my lover we most have been some where in Maine. Hitler said he would take the sea cost by the end of Fall to months away. I don’t even think it will take that long. He is bent on killing all that aren’t part of his perfect race. Cal and I have been running ever scene we got off the boat in Portland we thought it would be safe. It seems we had beaten the Nazis there by about 12 hours that’s, that’s when there were six of us. Now all that remains are me and Cal. We lost Mikhail the first night we got to Portland he died giving us time to run, than we lost Sara, and Terry a week latter at a refuge camp. After that we didn’t stay at refuge camps there only bigger targets. Then we lost Jade today, I just got back from burying her outside. We where going to find a safe place to live, were there was no war where we could live in peace. I wont stop till me and Cal find that place.
Andruin
~andruin
I like it... a very interesting premise for a story.
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