OPEN FORUM - critique my anatomy!!
13 years ago
General
I've been feeling a lot of "blargh my art is poop" lately, so of course that means TRYING HARDER AND NOT BEING A WEENIE. There's a lot that I need to improve on (as always, for the rest of my life, until I fall into a hole and die!), but for the purpose of this journal I want to focus on ANATOMY. So critique the hell out of me, please! You don't need to give me long-winded responses if you don't want, just bulleted things or ideas are fine.
ANYWAY, PROMPTS (if you want - don't have to answer these, could just say what's on your mind!):
~What about the way I draw anatomy (of any kind - humanoid/anthro, animal, fantasy, a particular species) do I CONSISTENTLY GET WRONG?
~What about the way I draw anatomy do I CONSISTENTLY GET RIGHT? (IE, things should be mindful of being appealing, and maybe not change too much in the future)
~Concerning anatomy, what specifically would you suggest I do to IMPROVE IN THE FUTURE? (IE, poses/bodytypes/species/etc to focus on, books or resources you think would help me especially)
~If you want to focus your critique on one piece in particular rather than generalities, be my guest! Redlining is welcome, too!
I'd prefer to focus on stuff I've done within the last year (so mostly everything in this account), because critiquing something in particular that's older than that might be kinda pointless if I don't draw quite like that anymore, haha.
If you have nothing to say about anatomy, feel free to critique anything else about my art if you want, too! :O
PS, as long as you're honest, you won't hurt my feelings! :B CMONNNN RIP MY ART APART
ANYWAY, PROMPTS (if you want - don't have to answer these, could just say what's on your mind!):
~What about the way I draw anatomy (of any kind - humanoid/anthro, animal, fantasy, a particular species) do I CONSISTENTLY GET WRONG?
~What about the way I draw anatomy do I CONSISTENTLY GET RIGHT? (IE, things should be mindful of being appealing, and maybe not change too much in the future)
~Concerning anatomy, what specifically would you suggest I do to IMPROVE IN THE FUTURE? (IE, poses/bodytypes/species/etc to focus on, books or resources you think would help me especially)
~If you want to focus your critique on one piece in particular rather than generalities, be my guest! Redlining is welcome, too!
I'd prefer to focus on stuff I've done within the last year (so mostly everything in this account), because critiquing something in particular that's older than that might be kinda pointless if I don't draw quite like that anymore, haha.
If you have nothing to say about anatomy, feel free to critique anything else about my art if you want, too! :O
PS, as long as you're honest, you won't hurt my feelings! :B CMONNNN RIP MY ART APART
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Some fat shorties, not-as-curvies etc! Would be great 8D
Honestly I'm struggling here hahaha. It'd be cool to see more varying body types from you, like that other guy said, definitely! You are good at anatomy but a lot of the stuff you draw fits into one of a few kinds of body types you draw. Lesse some muscle, some burly etc.
I'd def like to see more experimental/fineart typish stuff from you, kinda as you're my goto for art know how at the moment hehh, and some of your stuff, eg http://www.furaffinity.net/view/7531733/ , is -really gr8-.
Idk more naturalistic anatomy because a lot of your stuff is pretty stylised. More arty stuff because that's fun. Idk idk I'm crap at critique.
Your line weight is pretty damn tight. Good and meaningful variations
Get your ass to one of the ten million life drawing sessions held around town. There are free ones for sure!
i dont critic much nor do thseo i knwo either for the falemware and atacks one gets for doing so as people gets so offended by it.
That's all I have to say ;n; I'm not helpful.