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12 years ago
I am sure all of my watchers at least have seen 
artwork, and her characters but did you know she is an author too? Working on her first novel and wants constructive feedback, but currently has only posted it on DA. She would highly appreciate anyone reading and giving her feedback.
First chapter can be found here:
teknicolortiger.deviantart.com/art/The-Monster-of-Amber-Peace-Chapter-1-Part-1-322249538
artwork, and her characters but did you know she is an author too? Working on her first novel and wants constructive feedback, but currently has only posted it on DA. She would highly appreciate anyone reading and giving her feedback. First chapter can be found here:
teknicolortiger.deviantart.com/art/The-Monster-of-Amber-Peace-Chapter-1-Part-1-322249538
I won't be able to give any grammer or spelling help but I can at least let Hali know if the story flows well in my reading.