Obviously some of my older writing I have yet to fix typos etc. but on my over all work what do you think of it?

I'm also thinking about trying trying story commissions for people or trades. On the commission part I would do it as a pay after finished style and I'd keep it pretty cheap since well it's short stories heh. I guess I just kinda want to see if my work can be on a level that people would be willing to spend a little bit of money on. So feed back if you'd please on what you think if you read this lol.