IT IS TIME TO CRITIQUE ME!!
12 years ago
It has been pointed out to me that there are very major flaws in my artwork, particularly in the faces. For example, the cheek fluff that I use is a blatant incorporation of Warner's signature style used in Lola/Babs Bunny. The hands are also horribly off, not to mention the hairstyles. What do YOU see I'm doing wrong? Write long, drawn-out paragraphs if you need to. Cite specific images I've drawn, and point out what needs improvement.
Gimme comments!!!!
Gimme comments!!!!
mainly the fingers seem too long and the palm too small, though for the most
part, they look better than any of my hands. Lol. I'm terrible at them.
In these two:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/7102506/
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/10329385/
the fingers look really, really long. Like E.T. long, or at least it seems like it. We
are so familiar with our hands and what they look like, but when drawing them,
it is so difficult, because the slightest thing off makes it obvious.
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2012280/
it does look a little odd to me, though I can't quite say why. I think
maybe that particular hairstyle clashes with the style of your faces. It
makes the top of her head look small compared to the big eyes and
puffy cheeks. At a quick glance, the rest of your hairstyles seems fine.
advice about hands, but I have so much trouble with them,
I have the obvious habit of hiding them or making them
vague so I don't screw them up... =^__^;=
though a few might be a little awkwardly posed, but
beyond that I wouldn't call it "a major flaw". Just keep
drawing and they'll eventually start to feel more natural.
On the topic of hairstyles, if you seem to be drawing the same few styles all the time, then I suggest looking at photos and making note of new styles you might want to draw.
As for people telling you that these things are off, and I'm sure in their eyes they seem to be, so I'm not going to say they're wrong. They're just not seeing what they think should be there. So I suggest going back and seeing how many people are saying these things, and compare it to the number of watchers you have. You may find the number isn't as big as you think.
That said, if YOU feel these things need changing, then by all means go for it ^.^
wrong with wanting to improve or evolve that style if you want.