I was getting ready to start a story about Vincent today when I realized something I probably should have seen coming. When writing for a character whose species I made up, he'll inevitably come across someone who doesn't know what he is. And I either have him make an explanation which repeats things I've already spelled out in detail in the descriptions, or I skip the explanation and leave a plot hole in the story. It's kind of a thing with me that when I write something I never assume that someone has read the stuff before it. I'm working on a sequel to Nocturnal Intermission which sums up the first story in a couple paragraphs before I get to the new stuff.

Maybe I should just remove the Mokaji descriptions if it becomes a problem.

JOURNAL OVER.