Spent most of the last two days that I've had my computer set up fighting it to get it to work after nearly three months of no use. I've also been thinking very hard about my story, and as of now I'm very happy to say that I am once full chapter closer to being finished. I'd forgotten how much of a pain in the ass it was to come up with new material on my own O.o (of course six months being depressed to the point of nearly losing the will to live... again... didn't help)
I finished up Chapter Sixteen about fifteen minutes before writing this. Chapter Sixteen took a little bit of a different direction that I was planning, but it fit the story very well,  purplemonkey will be extremely happy to know that sixteen marks the end of the "reflection" portion of the story, with the exception of the first paragraph of seventeen, which marks the revival of the original story direction, as Jessie will be remembering his life up to the Escape from Mechatropolis.
I should probably justify my reason for doing it this way. I have been looking at the story as I have it posted on here, as compared to other stories I've read; it's been pointed out to me that my parts of chapters often are longer than most people's whole stories... Well taking that into consideration I started looking closely at the "Escape" chapter and it's ten parts; As I and purplemonkey were reading through it, I came to the conclusion that it was very definitely long enough to be a stand alone story, not only that but it had several points I felt were either too widely gapped, or we broken and needed revised. I feel that with some help, if I can get anymore... everything will fall together very nicely and this story will finally have a solid foundation.
I am extremely happy with the fact that I'm so close to having this done for the final time, and am beginning to feel as though I've actually done something with myself. In the eleven years that I've been writing like this, this is the first time I've felt that a project was going so smooth, I've managed to iron out the wrinkles and add a bit of WTF to the story to completely confuse people ;) but I finally feel as though this story is reaching it desired level of depth.
Enorha is a world that can be simply explained, I feel that to do it at all mean it has to be done right, and I feel as though Enorha should be experienced through the character's eyes. There is so much left to share, The story I started two years ago is, is only the start... One day Jessie and his friends will slip back through the rift, and reach Earth.