I had a quiet room (That is Rare) Like today so I have pretty much finished up part 2

I did rush job the first part of the story.... It was kinda a story made from venting... So I didn't take much time with it at all.

I really like how it is coming along I just need to put the finishing touches and Ill be posting it soon.

My main focus is on The kitty and the mousy however.. I learned In a writing class I attended a few months ago That the way I wrote the Kitsune out was the wrong way to go.. He should have been treated a secondary character like I intended... at the beginning....I should have gotten to the good part and shown how much of a ass he was later -shrugs-

But I wanted him hated and the other two characters liked so... I think its all good :3 and I thought of better twists with the story for later so its time to get writing. <3

The funny thing is... It was almost done for the longest time all it needed was one more para! O.o Time flies.. It was years and I was too tied up to finish one para... >.>

And do a lot of corrections and look over it of course.