FA+
Shop
New series in the works: You're Prey
12 years ago
Alright so this popped in to my head about a choose your own adventure type deal. I know there really common right now especially with stank, humbug and dez but i thought i try a written approach.
In this "adventure" you were recently eaten by a pred named Lufa, a fox anthro about 24 years old or so and now you are stuck in her belly. This adventure can have several out comes including whether you live or die. After each set up is complete a series of choices can be made. You could please her, disrupt her life, befriend her or tear her apart if you are well enough with your words. 2 elements come in to play.
Respect level: How much she cares for you. The higher it is the better she will treat you and maybe be even let you live. This one will fluctuate a lot though so be careful.
The neutral ground is 50%, meaning she has no care for you the prey. As bad as that sounds, below 50% means she'll torment you, tease you, or if she really despise you, speed her digestion up. Above 50% means she'll treat you with more respect, make it more comfortable or even slow her digestive system down.
Digestion level: This is a timer system. Her belly fills with acid over time at an average rate of 5% per hour (may change in further production.) Some times what you do in the belly though will speed or slow it down. Ultimately the story will end at 100%
Once digestion reaches 100% she will cast judgement on you and see whether or not you should die.
I'm hoping to make each entry a half a page with voting ending in 4 days and an upload in 7 days if i can. Let me know what you think.
In this "adventure" you were recently eaten by a pred named Lufa, a fox anthro about 24 years old or so and now you are stuck in her belly. This adventure can have several out comes including whether you live or die. After each set up is complete a series of choices can be made. You could please her, disrupt her life, befriend her or tear her apart if you are well enough with your words. 2 elements come in to play.
Respect level: How much she cares for you. The higher it is the better she will treat you and maybe be even let you live. This one will fluctuate a lot though so be careful.
The neutral ground is 50%, meaning she has no care for you the prey. As bad as that sounds, below 50% means she'll torment you, tease you, or if she really despise you, speed her digestion up. Above 50% means she'll treat you with more respect, make it more comfortable or even slow her digestive system down.
Digestion level: This is a timer system. Her belly fills with acid over time at an average rate of 5% per hour (may change in further production.) Some times what you do in the belly though will speed or slow it down. Ultimately the story will end at 100%
Once digestion reaches 100% she will cast judgement on you and see whether or not you should die.
I'm hoping to make each entry a half a page with voting ending in 4 days and an upload in 7 days if i can. Let me know what you think.
A question though, is the only way out for her to willingly release you, or might there potentially be a way to nauseate her enough for her to regurgitate you? I can see if you want dialogue to be the primary/only determining factor of the prey's fate, but I'm still curious.
P.S. Haven't read the guide yet. Will do so shortly.