It has come to my attention that the story has revealed too much, too fast as well as being too long to read.
I'm going to revise my story to make it more easier for people to read as well as not to reveal alot in very little time. What also is brought to my attention is the lack of lengthy character development and sci-fi descriptions of backgrounds to give readers of a futuristic feel to it.
I feel that the 1st episode has some unexplained events and missing timelines of characters.