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Update on story progress!
12 years ago
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Here's some more info about the story idea I've been working on that i mentioned in this journal. I'll do my best not to leak any spoilers!
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The possible title (and currently the most likely title) is "The Prince's Quest."
The story takes place in a land called Impervia, named for its excellent terrain that makes it difficult for enemies to invade it.
The main character will be Prince Saffir Emros (Saf is his nickname), a golden lion with ocean blue eyes, as well as a water-magic user.
His best friend will be Rubo, a grey wolf with white-tipped ears and tail, who is a soldier trained in fire-magic.
The king is a golden lion with olive green eyes named King Tydus, the 13th king of Impervia, who is also a water-magic user like his son. (runs in the family?)
Currently, I can say for certain that the following magical elements will exist: Fire, Water, Lightning, and Celestial. I do plan on including Earth magic as well, but I may not include Air magic (what do you guys think?)
The "objects" I mentioned in my other journal that are required to properly control one's magic are going to be called Regulators, as they regulate the power of one's magic. (I was very intent on not using wands, as that concept seemed incredibly overused to me)
The plot of the story is that something sacred to Impervia is stolen from the palace (I've decided what it is now! But I won't reveal it just yet! ;3) and it is decided by King Tydus that although the risk may be great, he feels that his son, Saffir, is the ideal person to retrieve it. With the help of Rubo, it is up to Saffir to retrieve the stolen item, uncovering a grudge that dates back to the founding of his country. Suddenly, succeeding the throne has become far more complicated.
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So? What do you guys think? :) Suggestions? Comments? Let me know! I'd love some feedback on this. =)
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The possible title (and currently the most likely title) is "The Prince's Quest."
The story takes place in a land called Impervia, named for its excellent terrain that makes it difficult for enemies to invade it.
The main character will be Prince Saffir Emros (Saf is his nickname), a golden lion with ocean blue eyes, as well as a water-magic user.
His best friend will be Rubo, a grey wolf with white-tipped ears and tail, who is a soldier trained in fire-magic.
The king is a golden lion with olive green eyes named King Tydus, the 13th king of Impervia, who is also a water-magic user like his son. (runs in the family?)
Currently, I can say for certain that the following magical elements will exist: Fire, Water, Lightning, and Celestial. I do plan on including Earth magic as well, but I may not include Air magic (what do you guys think?)
The "objects" I mentioned in my other journal that are required to properly control one's magic are going to be called Regulators, as they regulate the power of one's magic. (I was very intent on not using wands, as that concept seemed incredibly overused to me)
The plot of the story is that something sacred to Impervia is stolen from the palace (I've decided what it is now! But I won't reveal it just yet! ;3) and it is decided by King Tydus that although the risk may be great, he feels that his son, Saffir, is the ideal person to retrieve it. With the help of Rubo, it is up to Saffir to retrieve the stolen item, uncovering a grudge that dates back to the founding of his country. Suddenly, succeeding the throne has become far more complicated.
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So? What do you guys think? :) Suggestions? Comments? Let me know! I'd love some feedback on this. =)
Im still deciding though. One of the towns in the story will be called Windor (known for being particularly breezy) so I may be able to work in air magic somehow. Right now, it's just not as cemented in the story as other magic types.
WE HAVE SOME POSSIBILITIES HERE
perhaps air magic is very rare and sought after
I'd also rather not have it be one of the rarer magics because then it would feel too similar to Avatar The Last Airbender. I'm sure I'll work something out though. :)
But yeah, using air as a buffer wouldn't be a terrible idea ^.^