Looks like my last upload went over like a lead balloon.

Since my coloured works in general seem to do worse than the black and white ones, I say it's time for open season on critiques.

Colored version: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/11469938/

Lineart/sketch: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/11469938/

So, too messy? Too busy? Color scheme sucks? Let me know!

In the meantime, I'll be switching to toon-shading for the next few. Easier to pull off.