Dear Writer: the house always wins
12 years ago
So your story involves a character whose..."personal attentions" turn people into more creatures like her. She's...somehow forced to sign a contract making her basically a slave of a strip club. The second chapter picks up as a random woman pays for a private dance with her. The extent of the club's precautions is telling the clients not to touch and leaving them alone with a guard outside. No glass between the dancer and client. No cameras or two-way mirrors. No guns in case the super-strong furry escapes. Needless to say, the client "touches", is transformed into another creature, they overpower the guard, then convert the owner*, and the entire club ends up transformed.
WHO COULDA SEEN THAT COMING
* Who doesn't even have his office door locked even though he knows she's coming, and actually tries to renegotiate even after he knows she's converted two people, one by force.
WHO COULDA SEEN THAT COMING
* Who doesn't even have his office door locked even though he knows she's coming, and actually tries to renegotiate even after he knows she's converted two people, one by force.
FA+

For once, I would love to see the exact opposite, where one's genre-savvyness results in them avoiding most of the sterotypical TF trappings, only to succumb to a twist no one sees coming.
And then John was the demons.