Sample writing
12 years ago
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I figured I'd post a small sample of my writing style here
The lean wolf walked hurriedly through the halls of the university dorms. He passed many people on his way, but he didn't look at them or mind that some of them were staring. There weren't many anthropomorphic beings on this campus, so many of the students weren't used to seeing a six foot, lean muscled black wolf with white ear and tail tips walking through the dorm. He didn't acknowledge any of them and quickened his pace some, his heart aching to be with his one and only. Finally he arrived at the top level, his dorm room was at the far side of the hall, the door decorated with multiple music artist posters.
He slowly opened the door, the sweet sound of calm orchestral music gently playing in the room. He stepped inside and softly closed the door, admiring the room. The room was simple, with a queen sized bed against the far wall and a closet decorated with music notes. Laying on the bed was a lithe fox. His fur was a dark olive green, with three purple verticals lines running from the top of his head, down his back to the base of his tail. The fox looked up at him, his brown eyes twinkling in the light as he stared at his lover, a broad smile spreading across his lips. The wolf dropped his bag and quietly walked over to the bed, sitting on its edge. The fox made a few hand signs at him, his eyes smiling brightly. "I had a decent day, just happy to be here." The wolf said after the fox had finished making the signs. His lover couldn't talk, but all the hand signs he made was just as good to the wolf. The fox made a heart symbol to the wolf. The wolf smiled and made the symbol back, moving beside the fox on the bed and gently wrapping his arms around his green torso. A quiet murr escaped from the fox as he put his head on the wolfs chest.
The wolf sighed happily and gently rubbed his paw along his lovers back, making the fox shiver slightly and wag his tail. The wolf gently put his head on top of the foxs, his eyes closing slowly as he dealt the familiar heat of another body pressed up against him. The last thing he heard before falling asleep was the soft snoring of the fox in his ear.
This was just a small thing I thought I'd do, I wrote it in 10 minutes so it's a little worse in quality than the ones I actually spend my time on, I always appreciate constructive feedback and ideas, please no hate though, that's all. ^*^
The lean wolf walked hurriedly through the halls of the university dorms. He passed many people on his way, but he didn't look at them or mind that some of them were staring. There weren't many anthropomorphic beings on this campus, so many of the students weren't used to seeing a six foot, lean muscled black wolf with white ear and tail tips walking through the dorm. He didn't acknowledge any of them and quickened his pace some, his heart aching to be with his one and only. Finally he arrived at the top level, his dorm room was at the far side of the hall, the door decorated with multiple music artist posters.
He slowly opened the door, the sweet sound of calm orchestral music gently playing in the room. He stepped inside and softly closed the door, admiring the room. The room was simple, with a queen sized bed against the far wall and a closet decorated with music notes. Laying on the bed was a lithe fox. His fur was a dark olive green, with three purple verticals lines running from the top of his head, down his back to the base of his tail. The fox looked up at him, his brown eyes twinkling in the light as he stared at his lover, a broad smile spreading across his lips. The wolf dropped his bag and quietly walked over to the bed, sitting on its edge. The fox made a few hand signs at him, his eyes smiling brightly. "I had a decent day, just happy to be here." The wolf said after the fox had finished making the signs. His lover couldn't talk, but all the hand signs he made was just as good to the wolf. The fox made a heart symbol to the wolf. The wolf smiled and made the symbol back, moving beside the fox on the bed and gently wrapping his arms around his green torso. A quiet murr escaped from the fox as he put his head on the wolfs chest.
The wolf sighed happily and gently rubbed his paw along his lovers back, making the fox shiver slightly and wag his tail. The wolf gently put his head on top of the foxs, his eyes closing slowly as he dealt the familiar heat of another body pressed up against him. The last thing he heard before falling asleep was the soft snoring of the fox in his ear.
This was just a small thing I thought I'd do, I wrote it in 10 minutes so it's a little worse in quality than the ones I actually spend my time on, I always appreciate constructive feedback and ideas, please no hate though, that's all. ^*^
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