Don't just stop because people say you are bad and put you down that is what they want! They find something that they cant do as well as you or think they are better at it than you and try to hinder you from doing it! What would have happened if every time someone said what a person did was awful and the person stop doing it? There would be no books no inventions no anything other than a wasteland of talent of pointless existence! So I urge you keep going because no matter what anyone says you like to write stories and quite frankly you don't need anyone's dang comments anyways!

I agree with IreKat. Don't let others hinder your ability to write awesome stories. I really enjoy your stories, so who cares if there is some little errors in the story. Nobody is perfect and the more you write, the better you will get at it. So don't stop doing what you like doing. the stories you had before were well wrote, and I completely understood everything you wrote in your stories. Write for the people who enjoy your stories, and don't listen to the people that dislike what you do. So in my opinion I think that you should continue to use the talent that you have and ignore the people that dislike your work, let the haters spin their wheels and you continue to do what you do best. Write stories for all to enjoy.