I have only posted a two stories so far, but i have 4 more in progress. Assuming that anyone is reading my stories, i wanted to open the field to PRODUCTIVE CRITICISM... so if you read something i've written and find a spelling error or think that some paragraph or another needs reworking ... please let me know...

send me a note/private message with the name of the story and how you think it could be improved

this way i can make my stories better, because i want my written stuff to kick ASS! huzzah!

thanks
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EDIT: the poetry is olderish but can be the target of criticism too.
"it's holding still...SHOOT IT!"