Please, if you do happen to check out or watch me (as few of those as there are!) I'd appreciate if you could take a look at my first personal submission.

It may seem a tad confusing, various alien races being mentioned you have no idea about and organizations that sound dubious at best.

However I'd appreciate critique and feedback, it was a confusing passage to write, a lot of flashbacks, dreamy sequences and ghostly apparitions to speak of.

Regardless I'd like to get some constructive critique if at all possible, as it is only an opening passage to an otherwise ongoing story (several ongoing for Kwar and his companions throughout the universe actually!) I figured I'd throw it up here and see what the interest was.

If folks like it and/or would like to see me edit or work on it some more then I'll be working on it as often as I can.

Thanks for reading!