Something New and Something Borrowed
12 years ago
As you may or may not have noticed, my latest submission is a writing piece. It's been a while since I've done much with that, beyond the occasional smattering of paragraph roleplays... all PG-rated, before you ask. A character concept that I've been sitting on for sometime over a year just evolved into an actual person, and I'm trying out more writing with her than visual (though each chapter will still have an image with flat-colored sketches from that chapter).
That said, the world she's living in is "borrowed" - as in not of my own creation.
For those of you familiar with this world, I'd appreciate feedback regarding consistency. For those of you who are not, I'd appreciate critique. Writing's been an on-again-off-again hobby for me for a while, and I want to improve it. Yes, it is a super-powered world. That aside, I'm aiming more at slice-of-life than action-thriller, though there will probably still be some of the latter.
I've got plans for chapters 2 and 3, and nebulous plans for a "sometime in the future" chapter. Ideally I'll have them up sometime around the dates that they actually take place, since the story is set in 2014, but with chapter 1 being on New Years and both 2 and 3 taking place on the 5th of January, we'll see how well that actually plays out.
Wish me luck! And thanks in advance for any help! :)
That said, the world she's living in is "borrowed" - as in not of my own creation.
For those of you familiar with this world, I'd appreciate feedback regarding consistency. For those of you who are not, I'd appreciate critique. Writing's been an on-again-off-again hobby for me for a while, and I want to improve it. Yes, it is a super-powered world. That aside, I'm aiming more at slice-of-life than action-thriller, though there will probably still be some of the latter.
I've got plans for chapters 2 and 3, and nebulous plans for a "sometime in the future" chapter. Ideally I'll have them up sometime around the dates that they actually take place, since the story is set in 2014, but with chapter 1 being on New Years and both 2 and 3 taking place on the 5th of January, we'll see how well that actually plays out.
Wish me luck! And thanks in advance for any help! :)
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