I like your style of writing. Its clear, descriptive and paints a clear image of what is happening.

As to smut, I love smut, you write smut really well.

I read your stories because you have a really sharp knack for blending together smut and a good storyline. Your stories are compelling and hard to 'put down', the wording and description is very clear and easy to absorb and it makes the smut scenes even more enjoyable because it feels like the reader is 'right there' in the middle of the action. I hope very sincerely to see more stories from you in the future, no matter what the subject matter. You are an excellent writer!

As for what you should focus on, I'd say focus on whatever you enjoy writing the most. Regardless of the content, you'll write it better and be more motivated if you focus on the ideas that you yourself enjoy the most. Your own enjoyment will show in the content. At least that's what I have found when it comes to writing, myself.

I like your writing style. I like smut, but I also like it to have a storyline to it as well.

Your spelling and grammar is excellent, which is surprisingly rare on FA.

Plus, you include just the right amount of humiliation in your stories.

No no no. Not surprisingly rare. Sadly rare.

I've simply dug your work, man. It's entertaining, and has made me think bout physics in a different light alittle, like with Knot Theory.

If you start focusing on what others want to see from you writing turns into work pretty quick.

I dig the story side.

Consideration of the audience is one of the most important and fundamental processes of writing.

It becomes work if I invest hours and hours and know I'll get nothing out of it. I'll have the satisfaction of writing something I like, but if I don't get any response from the community, I wonder if that satisfaction is justified.

Only reason I say it is that there are many unfinished series(es?) here because the writer noticed the story had drifted too far from where they intended.

My issues with series is just dedication. I'm not good at writing long things.

Well shit, you seemed to be doing fine before. Hell, my favorite in your gallery is the bandits/scandalous bastards stories...

I personally really enjoy the story and depth you are able to create surrounding your stories and characters. I'll take a well-developed story any day over the smuttiest smut. I must say, though, that the smut is certainly a nice bonus ^^

I started reading them for the yiffy stuff, i actually started watching because i like your style and the consistent quality of your work. you write very well and it's nice to read quality stuff that's not only about the smut =3

i can relate to the latest story, plus it really helps that your writing style is clear and realistic. waiting for more