Long Story
11 years ago
Specifically, I am not posting it because I have given it to my #1 critic and he has said that the prologue is good but needs something to make it more interesting, like a bit more emotion.
I am not surprised he says this, because I did pretty much force myself to write the prologue and my forced writing is usually shit.
I will fix this prologue and then post it here, but I'm not sure when I'll get around to that.
In the meantime you can follow it here http://www.quotev.com/story/4545766.....n-Heroes-Fail/ if you want to read the shitty prologue and the first and second "weekly" iterations which are apparently astoundingly better than the prologue.
Oh! And the current cover sucks, so I am considering finding some artist who would be willing to draw me a cover (for a fee, of course).
I am not surprised he says this, because I did pretty much force myself to write the prologue and my forced writing is usually shit.
I will fix this prologue and then post it here, but I'm not sure when I'll get around to that.
In the meantime you can follow it here http://www.quotev.com/story/4545766.....n-Heroes-Fail/ if you want to read the shitty prologue and the first and second "weekly" iterations which are apparently astoundingly better than the prologue.
Oh! And the current cover sucks, so I am considering finding some artist who would be willing to draw me a cover (for a fee, of course).
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