Feedback
11 years ago
General
So it occurs to me that the most feedback I ever got on my story was when
tried to rig things against
and none of those people have returned. I ask for feedback and barely get any. So, I'd like to ask.
1) What would you like to see in terms of plot?
2) Any allies you'd like to see?
3) Any enemies?
Help me out guys, I'm always listening.
tried to rig things against
and none of those people have returned. I ask for feedback and barely get any. So, I'd like to ask.1) What would you like to see in terms of plot?
2) Any allies you'd like to see?
3) Any enemies?
Help me out guys, I'm always listening.
FA+

2) Well anyone is alright by me
3) Um... Same as two?
I apologize for the weak feedback
1. Hmmm, possibly having to break an innocent pokemon out of jail?
2. A cute female Snivy would be nice, as well as a cute female Sylveon.
3. Maybe a femae Milotic who's constantly scheming to have you as her meal? A rival female Flygon would be nice too. One that plans on disposing of you by eating you.
1. An escort mission where the client would possibly double-cross you. Or not. Just an escort mission, or a search-and rescue. A bounty mission would be pretty good too.
2. I'm not vain, so I won't say that I want myself to show up more, but maybe add a Nidorino who is a rival for our Nidorina friend.
3. I liked the suggestion of a rival. A Flygon would be cool, but I think it might be better for it to be an Ice type, because then they would have an advantage over you, which would make it more satisfying when you beat them at stuff :P
2. If you like you can have Tyla as a ally, full time or temp, perhaps even Arcus as well :3
3. As with #2 i actually have a good 'bad guy' you can use if ya want hun, my umbreon witch Nera
Also your comment to Volsar has me curious as to who you meant by that
2. How about a Dragon-type that you have to rescue to get on your side? Maybe the captor could be...
3. An annoying Pokemon who looks really weak (pretty much any Fairy-type could play this part) that seems to have all this power. But really, they are weak, and have an ally secretly accomplishing everything they've taken credit for. Sort of like how in Sengoku Basara 3 you fight the "Invincible" Kanetsugu, take him down in one hit, and then fight Kenshin. You take down (or scare off, either could work) the weakling, then take on the real mastermind.