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FEEDBACK NEEDED
11 years ago
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As far as my literary works have gone, I need to know the opinion of my readers for improvement. What makes my work stand out to you, among all of the other stories you have read? What do you look forward to reading about, what series of mine was your favorite, etc. I would greatly appreciate your time, as I don't want to lose yet another talent of mine.
huskysergio
~huskysergio
Beaststridden part 3 is my favorite. :3
KnucklePuppy
~knucklepuppy
OP
Thank you, I'll study that story.
huskysergio
~huskysergio
It's basicly because it had some good elements, You explained the sorroundings well, you leveled and lowered the tension of the reader around halfway through the chapter, and the villains are pretty cool. :P
KnucklePuppy
~knucklepuppy
OP
Thanks a lot, what I see isn't what the reader would. If o get more feedback I can do a better job.
huskysergio
~huskysergio
Perhaps I can get a few more people to read one of your chapters, and then give a feedback on the chapter. I can host a journal on my page and link to yours for them to come see your gallery
KnucklePuppy
~knucklepuppy
OP
That sounds like a fantastic favor! Thanks a lot!
huskysergio
~huskysergio
I'll get right on it.
