My first attemp at writing a song. 0//_\\0 I call it Hatred.
11 years ago
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These feelings that I'm feeling. I'm not used to them. I wish to fuck I could just make them stop, to make it simple again. I can feel the spiders, biting at my skin. I just wish I could move because the venoms kicking in. I wish I could stop shush them, these voices in my head. I fucking wish I had a gun, a bullet might scilence them again. I can feel the madness, pounding in my head, I need to kill it's so hard to tell if I'm going to snap again.
Chorus:Hatred, woah oh oh oh oh, Hatred. It's the only thing I've got left. Hatred, woah oh oh oh oh. Hatred, it's been my best friend. Hatred, woah oh oh oh oh. Hatred, love is overated.
All of these corpses, decaying on my bed. I can't help it, it's just so fun, the madness is here again.
Chorus: Hatred, woah oh oh oh oh, Hatred, I welcomed the madness in. Hatred, woah oh oh oh oh. Hatred, I wish I was dead.
Death is welcoming, I want to be dead. I grasp my rusty knife, in my fucking hand. I laugh as I guide it, slowly down the vein. I start to feel woozy, it's time for me to rest.
Chorus: Hatred, woah oh oh oh oh. Hatred, dead children in my closet. Hatred, woah oh oh oh oh. Hatred, I'm losing blood fast. Hatred, woah oh oh oh oh. Hatred, I'm not going to last.
I drop to the ground, losing blood fast. I can finally feel it, death is my salvation. I look at all of the corpses, scattered throughout my room. I smile as I realize, I will be visiting them soon. I can feel my life, slipping from my grasp. I take a great deep breath and in my final moments I laugh.
Chorus: Hatred, woah oh oh oh oh. Hatred, I have reached my end. Hatred, woah oh oh oh oh oh. Hatred, I was never buried. Hatred, woah oh oh oh oh. Hatred, I'll see you all in hell. Hatred, woah oh oh oh oh Hatred, heaven is overated.
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Thanks for reading! I'd love some critisom, as it is alwats apprieciated. This was my very first song I've ever written. Thanks y'all and buy.
- Beta The Wolf
Chorus:Hatred, woah oh oh oh oh, Hatred. It's the only thing I've got left. Hatred, woah oh oh oh oh. Hatred, it's been my best friend. Hatred, woah oh oh oh oh. Hatred, love is overated.
All of these corpses, decaying on my bed. I can't help it, it's just so fun, the madness is here again.
Chorus: Hatred, woah oh oh oh oh, Hatred, I welcomed the madness in. Hatred, woah oh oh oh oh. Hatred, I wish I was dead.
Death is welcoming, I want to be dead. I grasp my rusty knife, in my fucking hand. I laugh as I guide it, slowly down the vein. I start to feel woozy, it's time for me to rest.
Chorus: Hatred, woah oh oh oh oh. Hatred, dead children in my closet. Hatred, woah oh oh oh oh. Hatred, I'm losing blood fast. Hatred, woah oh oh oh oh. Hatred, I'm not going to last.
I drop to the ground, losing blood fast. I can finally feel it, death is my salvation. I look at all of the corpses, scattered throughout my room. I smile as I realize, I will be visiting them soon. I can feel my life, slipping from my grasp. I take a great deep breath and in my final moments I laugh.
Chorus: Hatred, woah oh oh oh oh. Hatred, I have reached my end. Hatred, woah oh oh oh oh oh. Hatred, I was never buried. Hatred, woah oh oh oh oh. Hatred, I'll see you all in hell. Hatred, woah oh oh oh oh Hatred, heaven is overated.
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Thanks for reading! I'd love some critisom, as it is alwats apprieciated. This was my very first song I've ever written. Thanks y'all and buy.
- Beta The Wolf
KhordKitty
~khordkitty
Sounds fun, are you gonna post a recording? =D
Beta-The-Wolf
~beta-the-wolf
OP
I don't know where I would get the backgroudn music and shit. I don't know how to compose songs. I can kind of sing though. I might though. I'll need to do some research.
KhordKitty
~khordkitty
I know how to, I can teach u =3 just add my skype
Beta-The-Wolf
~beta-the-wolf
OP
I ain't got a computer.
KhordKitty
~khordkitty
Iphone?
Beta-The-Wolf
~beta-the-wolf
OP
Unortunatly, no I'm lucky if I can 2 dollars to go to the gas station every now and again. My family is poor. Damn. I mean, I've got a Skype, but I'm rarely on it. :( It's lordpfoff with out any caps.
KhordKitty
~khordkitty
aw ok.. if you ever get access to skype I'll teach yeah =3
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