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Hello watchers, does anyone out there like stories? *closed*
11 years ago
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I recently got a suggestion to take story commissions, but to start off and get practice I am taking requests.
Here is how this will work.
you will give me the following
A: a short story prompt- details about location, characters, setting, etc.. anything you leave out, I will fill in with whatever strikes my fancy or arbitrarily
B: character information- refs, background info
C: statement(s) in the character's "voice"- this is so I can get a feel for their speech pattern
D(optional): pic to base the story off of
Is anyone interested? If you want examples of some of my stories, look in my gallery for the +story pics
Example of what the story could be like, and this is merely the intro to the story I am currently working on.
Greetings travelers, I am glad that you chose to stop by this wayward place. I have many stories to tell, some that could inspire you to greatness and others that would fill the most steadfast heart with dread. Today I tell the tale of two cousins and some of their adventures in Valrath. What? You have never heard of Valrath? Then let me give you a brief lesson in history. I assume you know that this is not the only world in existence correct?
“Ye ole geezer, there aren’t other worlds, “one of the wayfarers scoffs.
“Hush you fool, there is much you don’t know. I have seen the existence of other worlds,” a mage that had been traveling with the group spoke up, “Please do go on, Storyteller.”
Thank you. Good to hear that there are those that are aware, but did you know that besides the worlds that exist alongside ours, there are other worlds that normally can’t be reached? Our worlds are bound together by the flow of time. However, other worlds are bound together by different currents that weave amongst each other to form the Great Tapestry. The world of Valrath, much like many worlds that comprises the tapestry, is a land filled with magic. However, there are just as many worlds have different types of magic or lack magic entirely.
“Lack magic? Now you are speaking of the impossible,” the mage taunts.
The storyteller merely smiles and begins to whistle a tune. What was originally clear sky began to cloud over at an impossible rate. The wayfarers looked on terrified, but the mage was even more terrified as he felt no magic coming from the story teller. The storyteller whistles another tune and the skies clear again.
That is a song unique to one of the worlds that boast a different magic than this world’s. And the worlds that lack magic are also the ones that manage to learn how to travel amongst the stars. So magic, in several ways, has always held worlds back from their potential. But that is a story for another day. Now where was I?
A younger wayfarer pipes up “Valrath?”
Ah yes, Valrath. This tale belongs to two cousins and their discovery of a plot that would spark a war of such magnitude that even the gods feared for the fate of Valrath.
“Markl, we’re going to be late. Pick up the pace!”
*EDIT- VERY IMPORTANT* As these are requests, they may take a while to complete as I am a full time graduate research student. I apologize if these take a while, but school comes first and foremost
*EDIT2* Stories are going to have a 5 page limit, so if you don't want to end mid story let me know. I will shorten it up some.
Here is how this will work.
you will give me the following
A: a short story prompt- details about location, characters, setting, etc.. anything you leave out, I will fill in with whatever strikes my fancy or arbitrarily
B: character information- refs, background info
C: statement(s) in the character's "voice"- this is so I can get a feel for their speech pattern
D(optional): pic to base the story off of
Is anyone interested? If you want examples of some of my stories, look in my gallery for the +story pics
Example of what the story could be like, and this is merely the intro to the story I am currently working on.
Greetings travelers, I am glad that you chose to stop by this wayward place. I have many stories to tell, some that could inspire you to greatness and others that would fill the most steadfast heart with dread. Today I tell the tale of two cousins and some of their adventures in Valrath. What? You have never heard of Valrath? Then let me give you a brief lesson in history. I assume you know that this is not the only world in existence correct?
“Ye ole geezer, there aren’t other worlds, “one of the wayfarers scoffs.
“Hush you fool, there is much you don’t know. I have seen the existence of other worlds,” a mage that had been traveling with the group spoke up, “Please do go on, Storyteller.”
Thank you. Good to hear that there are those that are aware, but did you know that besides the worlds that exist alongside ours, there are other worlds that normally can’t be reached? Our worlds are bound together by the flow of time. However, other worlds are bound together by different currents that weave amongst each other to form the Great Tapestry. The world of Valrath, much like many worlds that comprises the tapestry, is a land filled with magic. However, there are just as many worlds have different types of magic or lack magic entirely.
“Lack magic? Now you are speaking of the impossible,” the mage taunts.
The storyteller merely smiles and begins to whistle a tune. What was originally clear sky began to cloud over at an impossible rate. The wayfarers looked on terrified, but the mage was even more terrified as he felt no magic coming from the story teller. The storyteller whistles another tune and the skies clear again.
That is a song unique to one of the worlds that boast a different magic than this world’s. And the worlds that lack magic are also the ones that manage to learn how to travel amongst the stars. So magic, in several ways, has always held worlds back from their potential. But that is a story for another day. Now where was I?
A younger wayfarer pipes up “Valrath?”
Ah yes, Valrath. This tale belongs to two cousins and their discovery of a plot that would spark a war of such magnitude that even the gods feared for the fate of Valrath.
“Markl, we’re going to be late. Pick up the pace!”
*EDIT- VERY IMPORTANT* As these are requests, they may take a while to complete as I am a full time graduate research student. I apologize if these take a while, but school comes first and foremost
*EDIT2* Stories are going to have a 5 page limit, so if you don't want to end mid story let me know. I will shorten it up some.
B: Vienna is here and here, she is most commonly found in her human form. Markl is here and here, and is most commonly found in his snow leopard form, with Vienna riding on top of him.
They are pretty much inseperable except when it comes to going inside buildings. Vienna often makes Markl wait outside because he hates taking on a more humanoid form. He's rather grumpy, and doesn't talk much. Even when he does, it's normally in a range of feline noises(growls, hissing, varying degrees of purring, so on) instead of human speach. Vienna can still understand him, though.
C: Vienna - Anger; "What do you mean you 'let him leave'? What part of 'guard the door, don't let anyone leave' I SHARD TO UNDERSTAND! AUGH! I can't believe you!"
Vienna - Repremanding; "You WHAT? Seriously? Uuugh...you are SO not getting dinner when I finally catch something.."
Vienna - Happy/Excited: "You mean it?! We're really going to go?! YESSS! Yesyesyesyes! Woo, LETS GO NOW!"
Markl - Anger; "Don't even THINK about it. I don't care how 'awesome' you think it is, we are NOT going, and that IS FINAL!"
Markl - Resigned; "...yippee...I can't wait. Oh joy."
Markl - Normally; "Whatever. Just get back here in an hour. I'm taking a damn nap."
I hope that's everything you needed/wanted. ^.^ Thanks for the chance, I hope you get more of these.
aaaaahm..either is fine. :o Whichever you feel is appropriate for them or not, I enjoy both. ^.^
Lorlei tend to lead nomadic, hermit-like lives. There are some; like Vienna; who just HAVE to interact with everything they see. They live about 4000 years, give or take a century.
Greetings travelers, I am glad that you chose to stop by this wayward place. I have many stories to tell, some that could inspire you to greatness and others that would fill the most steadfast heart with dread. Today I tell the tale of two cousins and some of their adventures in Valrath. What? You have never heard of Valrath? Then let me give you a brief lesson in history. I assume you know that this is not the only world in existence correct?
“Ye ole geezer, there aren’t other worlds, “one of the wayfarers scoffs.
“Hush you fool, there is much you don’t know. I have seen the existence of other worlds,” a mage that had been traveling with the group spoke up, “Please do go on, Storyteller.”
Thank you. Good to hear that there are those that are aware, but did you know that besides the worlds that exist alongside ours, there are other worlds that normally can’t be reached? Our worlds are bound together by the flow of time. However, other worlds are bound together by different currents that weave amongst each other to form the Great Tapestry. The world of Valrath, much like many worlds that comprises the tapestry, is a land filled with magic. However, there are just as many worlds have different types of magic or lack magic entirely.
“Lack magic? Now you are speaking of the impossible,” the mage taunts.
The storyteller merely smiles and begins to whistle a tune. What was originally clear sky began to cloud over at an impossible rate. The wayfarers looked on terrified, but the mage was even more terrified as he felt no magic coming from the story teller. The storyteller whistles another tune and the skies clear again.
That is a song unique to one of the worlds that boast a different magic than this world’s. And the worlds that lack magic are also the ones that manage to learn how to travel amongst the stars. So magic, in several ways, has always held worlds back from their potential. But that is a story for another day. Now where was I?
A younger wayfarer pipes up “Valrath?”
Ah yes, Valrath. This tale belongs to two cousins and their discovery of a plot that would spark a war of such magnitude that even the gods feared for the fate of Valrath.
“Markl, we’re going to be late. Pick up the pace!”
Valdosta Savoil: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/13634572/
Gi'Iesha Tailrazur: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/13002919/
The basic idea is this...
Val is a 37 year old (Earth years)/148 (Terradyne years) fox from the southern forests who left his tribe to pursue his dream of living in one of the big cities and to look for the mysterious figure that haunted his dreams. Val spent many a year wandering the wilderness before finding himself in the city of Mhan-Reth-yo outside the doors of the pleasure house Sashay's Twilight seeking employment. He was hired on the spot as one of the pleasure workers where he quickly climbed the ranks to be the second in command of the owner's primary establishment. 30 years after his latest promotion, the owner bought a dozen new Udai and Nareh slaves for various positions in the pleasure house, for house keeping, cooking and one the he was to train in the house's policies and conduct as pleasure slave.
Once the new slaves were delivered to the pleasure house, Val personally delivered each one to to his or her area to be trained and set to work before settling down to train the new pleasure slave. Before going to meet the new slave, he went over the documents that came with him. He was surprised to learn that the male was the son of a pair of Udai slaves and chose to live his life as a slave. He made sure that he was up to date on his sterilization and pleasure training and what he was and was not willing to do so that the system can be properly configured to assign the right clients to him after his training. Once he was satisfied that everything was in order, he got up and went to meet the new boy and to spend the next few days putting him through everything he can think of to ensure that he is up to the demands of his position, up to and including bedding him, testing to see if he can perform as well as his paperwork says he can.
Little did Val know, he was about to meet his future lover and mate, though that would not happen for another 5 years.
Just as a heads up, the Nahreh slaves are slaves by choice, the Udai are those forced into slavery for various crimes
The two are soft spoken, but when speaking people around do pay attention to them.
Val is more of a dominate type A personality and Gi is a dominate submissive personality.
If you are referring to males getting pregnant, it usually refers to males who a hybrids and crossbreeds, those males whose genetic cocktail is so scrambled from their parents and ancestors.
and for Gi his speaking style would be like someone who grew up on the streets of South London (example: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q5MtlR1I20M )
hope this helps
Gi grew up in one of the major cities on Terradyne hence his accent, despite his parents growing up in the Western Plains
Location:
-a hospital called "Rubén Zozaya"
Characters:
-Emile Faraday Dukati (commonly known as Dr. Faraday) is a serious-relaxed goat, 34 years old, Surgeon. Born in London, UK.
Says the truth, and respects decisions.
-Shia Yiyig is a dedicated and nice human woman, 25 years old, Receptionist. Born in Hong Kong, China.
-4 nurses (without name) they help in most of the things
-an 8 year old eagle girl (patient 1)
-a pregnant female deer (patient 2)
-an adult male rhino (patient 3)
-Tactum, adult male horse. An evil doctor experimented with him.
(blood yes, but not so exagerated)
Umm.. more or less story starts with Faraday checking every patient. Then a little break in the hospital's snack bar. After a couple of minutes Shia receives a call, some people bring Tactum unconcisious, hours later he wakes up and Dr.Faraday makes him questions, suddenly Tactum has a terrible headache, muscles grow (not as big as Hulk), there's a fight, some people get injured, except the 3 patients and Tactum unfortunately dies.
What do you think? ._.