The only negative thing I have to say is I'm not in more of the stories, and that makes me a very sad lion.

Tell me what kind of story you want your character to be in, and I'll consider it!

Well, one of my biggest criticisms of your work is that I never see any of it :)

Seriously, I started reading your stuff on SoFurry and then found you here, and it doesn't seem like you've posted anything in months. ^^ I know life gets in the way sometimes, but you should take time to do what you enjoy doing!

I posted my new story, "Big Pete," fairly recently. Since I'm newly unemployed, I've been working on more new stories. Stay tuned, my friend!

Hehe - "Big Pete" was two months ago, buddy ;)

But don't worry. It's why I watch you ^^ And I hope your situation improves.

My only critique is that I find a few minor typos within your work. :) One or two per story. They're an easy miss. ^^

It's expected. I can't be perfect ;)

I always wanted more... How shall I say it? Well, the money shots, mainly in the form of them peeing. Usually it's only one per story, and the best thing about piss is that you can do it multiple times pretty easily. Mind you, wetting has always been my biggest turn on. You also wrote a lot of really short stories, most of which I really enjoyed, but I was always left wanting more, to see where those characters would go next or given a bit more time, not only sexually but also emotionally. "Big Loads, Best Friends" is a very good example of taking the long form, and I really enjoyed those two stories. "The Most Unusual Bachelor Party" had plenty of the emotional development, but not enough descriptions of the guys just letting go, relaxing go. Stories like "Wet in the Fourth Quarter," "An Eventful Jog," and "Diapered and High" were really fun short pieces but also regrettably short on money shots. "Michael and Friends" went both ways from chapter to chapter but was always fun. "24/7" had some really hot wettings with great descriptions. I definitely would have loved to read about that fox having more rounds. The mind control and cross-dressing wasn't for me, but if you're going to experiment, you can't always please everyone, right? I found plenty to enjoy just the same. "Piss Bunny" had a few gallons of piss, which was fun even if they weren't doing it in their pants. ;)

To be brief, more occurrences of pissing, either in clothes or diapers or both. The bigger the bladder, the better. And cougars. Definitely cougars. Especially if they're beefy and middle-aged. Hope that helps.

That's very descriptive. Thank you!