ok, before i do chapter 2 pt2, i have a question
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i do have a few ideas to add but i want your opinions on what i should go for
1:
an arch rival to the main character-
a bounty hunter that wears a robotic suit with a few dragon like features, including a dragon helmet, wings, and claws.
he is attempting to hunt down drake for the reward, but sees the connection between the main character and drake
2:
a spoiled righ guy that attempts to go after drake for the reward, and the main character returns to drake to warn him
well both will end up with the main character going to warn drake, drake dosn't trust him, main character gets in harms way to protect drake, bla bla bla
so, which character do you guys want to see?
1:
an arch rival to the main character-
a bounty hunter that wears a robotic suit with a few dragon like features, including a dragon helmet, wings, and claws.
he is attempting to hunt down drake for the reward, but sees the connection between the main character and drake
2:
a spoiled righ guy that attempts to go after drake for the reward, and the main character returns to drake to warn him
well both will end up with the main character going to warn drake, drake dosn't trust him, main character gets in harms way to protect drake, bla bla bla
so, which character do you guys want to see?
1. You have a chance for a future contagonist which means deeper story.
2. An increase of the bond between the two main characters. Ugh. A toughy.
well tho, with the bountyhunter guy it would basicly be the same bit of plot for the other character, he goes for drake for the reward, the main character stops him in front of drake to win his trust back after leaving him, but a difference is, is that the bounty hunter sees the bond between drake and the main character
im really liking the hunter
ok, thanks! im gooing to get started on the net part!