Rain
11 years ago
☾☆☽☾☆☽☾☆☽☾☆☽☾☆☽☾☆☽☾☆☽☾☆☽☾☆☽☾☆☽☾☆☽☾☆☽ Rain, how many ways you are used to reflect emotion.
For me, you reflect how gloomy I feel as of late.
Lacking the warmth of my beloved's presence has made these recent days unbearable.
The falling rain portrays gloom as of late.
They say I'm ignoring my beloved when in fact he is all I think about.
He is constantly on my mind and everywhere I look.
Rain reflects the emptiness I feel when my love isn't around.
The tears I keep hidden from the world fall from the dark clouds over head.
Through the dark clouds I barely see the rainbow that signifies the day I shall be with my beloved again.
He is my pot of gold at the end of the rainbow for he is my treasure that I fight to keep.
First attempt to put my emotions into "poetry". In my opinion its crap, but first time for everything.
For me, you reflect how gloomy I feel as of late.
Lacking the warmth of my beloved's presence has made these recent days unbearable.
The falling rain portrays gloom as of late.
They say I'm ignoring my beloved when in fact he is all I think about.
He is constantly on my mind and everywhere I look.
Rain reflects the emptiness I feel when my love isn't around.
The tears I keep hidden from the world fall from the dark clouds over head.
Through the dark clouds I barely see the rainbow that signifies the day I shall be with my beloved again.
He is my pot of gold at the end of the rainbow for he is my treasure that I fight to keep.
First attempt to put my emotions into "poetry". In my opinion its crap, but first time for everything.
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Ty for trying I enjoyed reading it. Again, I hope things go better for you.
I shared it with one of my sisters and she said it was good. Guess its not that bad for a first try after about 6yrs since I tried the very first time.