TL;DR making comics is complicated as fuck, the porn comic is coming, but the tone will change.


So, i guess that a part of the people that follow my stuff have knowledge of my other account and they have probably read "The Coolest Horse", an amateur porn comic i made to test my capabilities of finishing a project, even if it was kinda simple and lame, because im pretty lazy.

Working on the sequel of this thing made me realize how hard is it to make a decent story, and how many times i have scrapped ideas just to get a good concept for a sequel to a yiff comic that is about horses getting kidnapped and raped by space pirates. It's not like people really care about the plot, they usually try to find a decent and funny reason to watch the characters fucking eachother.

A bunch of people liked the idea of a sentient chair, or the idea of the protagonist's dick having a smiley face as a birthmark on it. I dont know why, the whole comic was silly, but people liked it. It should be fine, it's not something i should worry about if people love it, right?

Well, i dont feel happy with the final result, and that's the problem.
It has my artstyle, it has a plot, but it's a mess.
A lot of the panels feel static and boring.
I could excuse the lack of coloring with better shading but the shading is terrible.
And there is a big lack of backgrounds. Taking all of this in mind, it seems like the comic is not even finished.
But the biggest issue is the tone.
I hated it.
The conversations and actions feels forced and out of place for the characters and the humor is bland and very innocent (Even though i tried to salvage it at the end where i added stuff hinted close to the end of the comic: like the Mariel fucking dying after losing her virginity or George originally being executed on the sequel and replaced with another protagonist.)
My sense of humor is kind of dark, so i feel like i'm leaving some kind of image of myself that it's not accurate
And i just dont want to make more of these because they are not my primary focus for future projects, since i have a game to make and fucking Pandemia (the comic i should have been working on a long time ago).

So yeah.
I have come to appreciate the people who make these stuff, it takes a lot of time, focus and experience.
Making this journal doesn't mean i will be quitting on The Coolest Mare, because i owe it to the people who read the first one.
But it means that this time the comic will be totally different. there will be a change of tone to one that suits my identity as an individual. Because that's a big part of making an unique story.
So, check out for future updates because the comic is coming very soon.

Thanks for reading this, and i will see you later.
Plaga.