Well, you already know that I love your writing, and I'm positively ecstatic that you're getting these commissions. Your writing is, overall, very wonderful: A wonderful balance of detail and action, and you have an amazing knack for capturing characters' personalities and working out how they'd behave and interact. And the sex scenes... Ooph. I know you asked me to not say "oomph" with critiques, but can't help it - generally speaking, they get me all kinds of hot and bothered

Honestly, the only thing I can say, as a criticism is that I do catch a few errors here and there through your pieces. Mostly it's just a letter or wrong word or grammar thing that probably gets missed in spell check or or when you're giving it a final going over - it happens. They're few and far between, and the stories are so engaging that they aren't much of a problem. Still, letting someone else (I.E. me, since I'm right here in the same house) have a run at the pieces for a final proofread before delivering them wouldn't be a bad thing.