Finally, after a year of putting it off. I have decided to rewrite my Kitchen Tustle story. With so many run on scentences and such, and the fact my mate is going to be an editor irl. I have decided to rewrite the whole story. Will repost as soon as my mate reads and edits it. xD Tell me what you think in comments below!

Update:
The Story itself seems solid. So right now, I will only have Kaze edit it. This story. After Re-reading it, Seems to be quite the cute little thing. I promiss anyone interested; I will write more! :D