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The Sky's the Limit story ideas discussion and ONE PIECE
10 years ago
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That sounds good. Going with Tso Lan first is a great idea. All at once or one after the other huh? Either works well.
My idea so far is before Tso Lan leaves he informs the others of the memory situation if he hasn't already, been awhile since I read it so I kinda forgot who he told yet. Anyway, once each one is informed one by one, they speak with Hsi Wu and Jade about the plan and what to do with Shendu before they say sayanaro to him and Demon World, planning ahead. Jade and Bai Tsa have a bit of a heart to heart chat, where she apologizes for all the trouble she caused, let bygones be bygones, becomes friends with Jade and think about what Bai's life goals will be with her newfound freedom when it happens. I'm thinking becoming the owner of a hot springs attraction in San Fransico or wherever it was that Uncle's shop and such were located in. Possibly even have her as a reserve member for the J-Team since why not? A water user would be quite helpful as an ally in all kinds of situations.
Tso Lan, what were his plans again? Cause with his knowledge thing, owning the biggest library ever suits him well.
Now as for an endgame kind of idea for the last few chapters when it's time, nearing the end of the story as everyone is getting freed, I think Shendu should find out what's going on, try to escape as well only to get flying spinning dragon kicked in the face back into the portal by Jade, recover and attempt it again, each time getting attacked by his siblings til he successfully gets out to cause trouble and begins the final battle with him where after a long drawn out epic fight for the ages with him vs. the J-Team and his siblings is finally forced back to the portal rendered unconscious before it closes on him forever, trapping him til quite possibly the end of time....or until someone is stupid and crazy enough to free him. Cause well lets face it we can't have this kind of story going without some kind of final battle thing going on to close the conflict.
Spleef: I think he WAS banished, but he somehow managed to make his way out, maybe someone who was like Daolon Wong summoned/freed him in the past.
I agree that Drago seemed half human. And the Demon World thing made sense. He certainly seemed to have a grudge against Jade. Him being concieved in Demon World makes more sense actually, since how would Shendu sire him in the normal timeline (less window of opportunity, at least) You just gave me a great idea for my story with this.
Possibly. That is a good theory and would explain things.
Really? That's pretty cool then. How to expand on that though? What about the Future Jade and Drago friend theory though? Think it's plausible that they were friends or even lovers in the future before Drago possibly went rogue after a betrayal and attempted to change the past? Cause that might explain him hating Jade and changing the future a bit...unless Jade meets him again outside of Demon World, not knowing who she is as it's Past Drago and not the one we know YET.
That's something I need to work out the details of. If I was to go with this general idea, then Hsi Wu would also need to free Drago from the Void, which might be easier as he was not actually banished by a Immortal, just dragged into it with Shendy. But then I think the other sorcerers would be wary of a spawn of Shendu.
True and I assume that was part of the plan anyway. They might be wary but hey they'd probably be wary of Hsi Wu being free now too. Though they should be more wary about the Oni and dark chi wizards. I highly doubt Tarakudo and his generals were the only oni out there accounted for if we think about things logically. Same for guys like Daolong wong.
ONE PIECE TREASURE CRUISE FRIEND CODES:
570,123,364 G3 Luffy LVL 99
975,434,449 Whitebeard
350,465,353 Whitebeard LVL 40 and up
185,346,392 Whitebeard LVL 65
564,437,943 Whitebeard
216,493,362 G3 Luffy LVL 85 and Whitebeard MAX LVL
My idea so far is before Tso Lan leaves he informs the others of the memory situation if he hasn't already, been awhile since I read it so I kinda forgot who he told yet. Anyway, once each one is informed one by one, they speak with Hsi Wu and Jade about the plan and what to do with Shendu before they say sayanaro to him and Demon World, planning ahead. Jade and Bai Tsa have a bit of a heart to heart chat, where she apologizes for all the trouble she caused, let bygones be bygones, becomes friends with Jade and think about what Bai's life goals will be with her newfound freedom when it happens. I'm thinking becoming the owner of a hot springs attraction in San Fransico or wherever it was that Uncle's shop and such were located in. Possibly even have her as a reserve member for the J-Team since why not? A water user would be quite helpful as an ally in all kinds of situations.
Tso Lan, what were his plans again? Cause with his knowledge thing, owning the biggest library ever suits him well.
Now as for an endgame kind of idea for the last few chapters when it's time, nearing the end of the story as everyone is getting freed, I think Shendu should find out what's going on, try to escape as well only to get flying spinning dragon kicked in the face back into the portal by Jade, recover and attempt it again, each time getting attacked by his siblings til he successfully gets out to cause trouble and begins the final battle with him where after a long drawn out epic fight for the ages with him vs. the J-Team and his siblings is finally forced back to the portal rendered unconscious before it closes on him forever, trapping him til quite possibly the end of time....or until someone is stupid and crazy enough to free him. Cause well lets face it we can't have this kind of story going without some kind of final battle thing going on to close the conflict.
Spleef: I think he WAS banished, but he somehow managed to make his way out, maybe someone who was like Daolon Wong summoned/freed him in the past.
I agree that Drago seemed half human. And the Demon World thing made sense. He certainly seemed to have a grudge against Jade. Him being concieved in Demon World makes more sense actually, since how would Shendu sire him in the normal timeline (less window of opportunity, at least) You just gave me a great idea for my story with this.
Possibly. That is a good theory and would explain things.
Really? That's pretty cool then. How to expand on that though? What about the Future Jade and Drago friend theory though? Think it's plausible that they were friends or even lovers in the future before Drago possibly went rogue after a betrayal and attempted to change the past? Cause that might explain him hating Jade and changing the future a bit...unless Jade meets him again outside of Demon World, not knowing who she is as it's Past Drago and not the one we know YET.
That's something I need to work out the details of. If I was to go with this general idea, then Hsi Wu would also need to free Drago from the Void, which might be easier as he was not actually banished by a Immortal, just dragged into it with Shendy. But then I think the other sorcerers would be wary of a spawn of Shendu.
True and I assume that was part of the plan anyway. They might be wary but hey they'd probably be wary of Hsi Wu being free now too. Though they should be more wary about the Oni and dark chi wizards. I highly doubt Tarakudo and his generals were the only oni out there accounted for if we think about things logically. Same for guys like Daolong wong.
ONE PIECE TREASURE CRUISE FRIEND CODES:
570,123,364 G3 Luffy LVL 99
975,434,449 Whitebeard
350,465,353 Whitebeard LVL 40 and up
185,346,392 Whitebeard LVL 65
564,437,943 Whitebeard
216,493,362 G3 Luffy LVL 85 and Whitebeard MAX LVL
