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Just Curious but....
10 years ago
Would anyone be interested in grading my writing skills through a giant/giantess anthro Choose Your Own Adventure? I'm trying to see if my writing skills meets the mark to where I could start offering them to the many users of FA. While I know this isn't everyone's cup of tea. I would like for those interested to leave their comments and tell me where the story should go next!
Also, this person here is holding a free raffle, and who doesn't like free stuff???
https://www.furaffinity.net/journal/6849437/
You slowly wake up with a yawn as you don't remember ever having such a good night's sleep. You slowly sit up and wipe the sleep out of your eyes as you couldn't help but feel...different somehow. As you look down at yourself, you suddenly realize what's different as your clothes and bed are made from the finest silk! Not only that, but the bed looked like it went on for miles as you could just barely make out the end of the bed. You weren't sure if this was some kind of a joke or a dream but you liked where it was going! Still, if this really was dream. Then where were the girls?
"Good morning Sir! How did you sleep?" A hevenly female voice said from behind you as it seemed your dream....slowly turned into a nightmare! Instead of the beautiful bikini model you were expecting, you were greeted by a giant female bunny anthro in a maid's outfit! She gives you a humble curtsy as she carefully picks you up. "Pardon me sir but I'm afraid if we don't hurry, we'll be late for your meeting!" She says as she gently pick you up and places you in her palm as she begins to change your clothes. With surprising speed and accuracy. As soon as one piece of garment is taken away, another takes its place as you're left standing in a sort of royal military outfit. "Now that you're presentable sir, let's take you to the Strategy Room shall we?" She said as she began to exit the room and carry you away.
At first, you were to speechless to say anything as you were carried away by this giant hare. But after seeing how real everything felt....it couldn't have been a dream! As they exited the room. He couldn't believe what he was seeing as his once little apartment was now a huge castle! With more giant anthro guards, maids, and butlers, it was obvious that wherever you were now. Was nothing like the world you left behind! As you passed, some of the guards would give you a salute, while the maids couldn't help but curtsy and giggle as you walked by. You could even hear them whispering about how cute and handsome you were. Although at your size, a whisper was so loud that it was like they were saying it to your face. And hanging high above your head were Royal Flags, each flying the same proud looking symbol. A side shot of a human face, followed by a side shot of an anthro's face. As the two images are back to back along with a crown covering both of the sticthed picture's heads. "Uh....ma'am...just...just where am I?" You ask as it causes a chuckle from your maid.
"Oh sir. Surely you must be joking with me right? And for royalty to call me ma'am...hehehe...it's just never been done before sir." The maid laughed as everything was starting to make sense. The fancy clothes, the maids, the guards, all of this pointed to one thing. You had become royalty over night! Still...just how could that be ? A dozen questions filled your mind as you wanted to ask the Maid a few more question. Sadly, they would have to wait, as the bunny maid opens a door as high ranking military personal rose and stood at attention at your presence. You couldn't help but feel even smaller than you already were as you were placed on a marble table as the maid humbly left you to the meeting at hand.
Male and Female anthros alike were at attention and waiting for your orders as you couldn't help but smile nervously. "Uh...at...at ease everyone! P-Please....take a seat..." You say as they thank you and take their seats. "Sir. We are ready to enact your orders for today! Shall we continue our advancement to the East ? Or shall we send our troops to explore the oceans of the West?" A lion general asked as just one swipe of his hand could wipe out platoon of human soldiers. As you stand on the table, wondering what to say. A holographic map appears underneath you as you can see the position of your castle and your troops as it was time to make a decision.
You could take command and just go along with this. Learning about who serves you as you go. Besides, you're treated like a King by these people. Why question a good thing right?
Then again, if something is too good to be true....it usually is! Maybe it's best to let the Generals make the decisions while you head back into your quarters and figure out what's going on first?
Also, this person here is holding a free raffle, and who doesn't like free stuff???
https://www.furaffinity.net/journal/6849437/
You slowly wake up with a yawn as you don't remember ever having such a good night's sleep. You slowly sit up and wipe the sleep out of your eyes as you couldn't help but feel...different somehow. As you look down at yourself, you suddenly realize what's different as your clothes and bed are made from the finest silk! Not only that, but the bed looked like it went on for miles as you could just barely make out the end of the bed. You weren't sure if this was some kind of a joke or a dream but you liked where it was going! Still, if this really was dream. Then where were the girls?
"Good morning Sir! How did you sleep?" A hevenly female voice said from behind you as it seemed your dream....slowly turned into a nightmare! Instead of the beautiful bikini model you were expecting, you were greeted by a giant female bunny anthro in a maid's outfit! She gives you a humble curtsy as she carefully picks you up. "Pardon me sir but I'm afraid if we don't hurry, we'll be late for your meeting!" She says as she gently pick you up and places you in her palm as she begins to change your clothes. With surprising speed and accuracy. As soon as one piece of garment is taken away, another takes its place as you're left standing in a sort of royal military outfit. "Now that you're presentable sir, let's take you to the Strategy Room shall we?" She said as she began to exit the room and carry you away.
At first, you were to speechless to say anything as you were carried away by this giant hare. But after seeing how real everything felt....it couldn't have been a dream! As they exited the room. He couldn't believe what he was seeing as his once little apartment was now a huge castle! With more giant anthro guards, maids, and butlers, it was obvious that wherever you were now. Was nothing like the world you left behind! As you passed, some of the guards would give you a salute, while the maids couldn't help but curtsy and giggle as you walked by. You could even hear them whispering about how cute and handsome you were. Although at your size, a whisper was so loud that it was like they were saying it to your face. And hanging high above your head were Royal Flags, each flying the same proud looking symbol. A side shot of a human face, followed by a side shot of an anthro's face. As the two images are back to back along with a crown covering both of the sticthed picture's heads. "Uh....ma'am...just...just where am I?" You ask as it causes a chuckle from your maid.
"Oh sir. Surely you must be joking with me right? And for royalty to call me ma'am...hehehe...it's just never been done before sir." The maid laughed as everything was starting to make sense. The fancy clothes, the maids, the guards, all of this pointed to one thing. You had become royalty over night! Still...just how could that be ? A dozen questions filled your mind as you wanted to ask the Maid a few more question. Sadly, they would have to wait, as the bunny maid opens a door as high ranking military personal rose and stood at attention at your presence. You couldn't help but feel even smaller than you already were as you were placed on a marble table as the maid humbly left you to the meeting at hand.
Male and Female anthros alike were at attention and waiting for your orders as you couldn't help but smile nervously. "Uh...at...at ease everyone! P-Please....take a seat..." You say as they thank you and take their seats. "Sir. We are ready to enact your orders for today! Shall we continue our advancement to the East ? Or shall we send our troops to explore the oceans of the West?" A lion general asked as just one swipe of his hand could wipe out platoon of human soldiers. As you stand on the table, wondering what to say. A holographic map appears underneath you as you can see the position of your castle and your troops as it was time to make a decision.
You could take command and just go along with this. Learning about who serves you as you go. Besides, you're treated like a King by these people. Why question a good thing right?
Then again, if something is too good to be true....it usually is! Maybe it's best to let the Generals make the decisions while you head back into your quarters and figure out what's going on first?
Now, where is your story located so I may begin my observation?
And here it is!
And sure! I'll keep and eye out and participate in the voting, might as well!