Well ours was dropped as you didn't like it and I didn't have a female anyway so...yeah...best I can think of is Athena given the greek goddess was all about wisdom, courage, inspiration, civilization, law and justice, mathematics, strength, war strategy, the arts, crafts, and skill. A good few things the I.rex had going for it.

I like it, but the I. Rex's biggest characteristic, to me, was that she was a murder machine. Like the raptors in the first film, she's a highly dangerous and murderous creature.

Thats where the strength and war part comes in...there is no discripition saying it was for good or anything so it is inturprated the way you want.

Plus forgot, its the name of a goddess...not like they were all nice anyway. Doing whatever they wanted, manipulating others or by force.

Trying to go out of the mundane. I'll try going with the system I usually go for with the naming of my own characters. The name that came to mind after a bit of thought was Si'skara. For a silverish dino with no doubt numerous scars from her encounters with both humans, the T-rex, as well as one self inflicted wound to remove the tracker.

Hmmm, I like it, but I feel like it doesn't describe her character at all. That's a major component, and as well, she hasn't been used yet whatsoever. She was intended to be a surprise character after your character beats Tyrania, her first time being used in the field, however, things go wrong...

I suppose I should have explained that a little better.

It's fine, no worries. I'm here more for the fun than to win anything. ^^

I am glad to hear you arm is doing better, but I will be honest I am amazed you lasted with the rps as long as you did. The premise was actually a very good and intriguing one, however I feel the biggest failing was you let the carrot dangle a little too close to the stick. Going into it I really wasn't sure what the whole deal was going to be and I was honestly expecting to try some kind of product get to be overly muscled and then be like rawr, oh fight your genetically enhanced monster to figure out who is the superior fighter now that I am modded up too. Ok! Instead it was a gauntlet style event which really wasn't foreshadowed and to be honest since I only made it through tier one, wasn't all that fun. You can have a long drawn out series of fight if one of two criterion is met. The first being unique and interesting characters to fight against and the second cool and interesting locations and areas between fights.

The way the whole thing was set up you gave us really only one choice. Rush to the finish to get the pic because you said the first to finish got the pic, rather then the one who made the best rp. The difference is, you put a time constraint on us and when you revealed the fights, it was like oh shit, got to rush to the end to get the free pic RAWR FIGHT FIGHT FIGHT FIGHT! Of the 4 dino's I fought, I got the personality of two, the compy who was a masochist, which I learned due to exposition on your part, and the hard headed on that was stubborn that was once again established through more expositional use rather then revealed naturally. Also with the fighters not talking, they were basically video game characters to be used, abused and taken down.

When setting up a story like this a couple of things to keep in mind. You want to give the player enough creative freedom to do what they want when they want, but also to give them choices and options that let you control the narrative flow. For example, with all the fighters in containment, we never got to see them or even really get to know them as more than stand up knock down fights. Had the girls been walking around, chatting it up, or even been in containment cells where you could talk and interact with we might have been more inclined to go discuss with them.

Beyond that introducing us to other people on the island other then Ross would have been helpful. It is obvious that he was a bit of a clone of the Indian fellow from Jurassic World and I kind of already saw that and John Hammond to boot, so two sides of the same coin really.

For an example on how to create a memorable character in a DnD game I ran. I made one shop keeper super creepy, I mean like he must be the devil kind of creepy, knew lots of dark lore and just gave off a vibe of just pure evil. The players remembered him, and came back to the same town several times just to check up on him to make sure no evil was taking place. Eventually he followed them into a dungeon and they met him on the way out to learn that he gets his goods and swag from following adventurous into dungeons to collect the stuff they miss, or to scavenge their dead bodies. They were so intrigued they worked for the guy for a while. A simple he just seems super evil but is really nice is a way to hook people while you try and figure things out. But since he took the time to speak to the players while they were buying they got the creepy vibe, and everything blossomed from there. Since the most we got out of our fights was orgasmic moan, not much to build on there.

Finally my point through all of this, is the set up wasn't bad, but you gave the player too much control. Had you wanted to stop the fights it was a simple. That is all for today ma'am. We shall begin again tomorrow. Yes I know you wish to continue but I for one want to eat and I shall not take no for an answer, and you shall not refuse as I believe I can think of a million reasons for you to say yes and join me. Little things like that with Ross showing off his wealth and his overall outlook on life. Since he was a Masani clone, there wasn't much for me to get invested in so no real reason to talk to unless kind of forced too as seemed to be needed here.

Now onto the naming bit. Hmm, couple of ideas.

Blanca, pretty easy as she is a big white dino but nothing really wow about the name to be honest.

Branka, similar to blanca but not quite as cool.

Alicain, I like as it sort of sounds like pain and alone combined a bit with an extra letter thrown in.

Fre'ka, just a play on words for freak.

Tarana means torn which kind of fits her.

Reix, respelling of I. Rex

This one, more a fact she doesn't feel she belongs so has mostly lost the idea of singular self.

beyond that I can't really offer up more then some generic name ideas for the character. If you want something a little better, I need to know her personality, physical description as well as just an overall idea of who she is. Outside of that hope I was a bit helpful and this is in no way an insulting comment or meant to tear you down, more offering advice on how to be better at this in the future.

Thank you for the feedback!

My biggest issue, personally, was that there was a story to all of this that I couldn't explain because it was "Fight fight fight." However I am the only one to blame for that, honestly. You're right though, I gave too much control to the player, and therefore wasn't able to explore any aspects of the story, which you would find some things are a little deviated from Jurassic Park, however I guess now you'll just have to read the chapters to see what my intent was.

Now then, onto the name. The animals are, for the most part, derived from how they were in the films. Indominus is no exception. She's Sekhmet the Spinosaurus, except she's even more insane and bloodthirsty. The dial was cranked to 11 when trying to create something a little more "exciting," because of reasons to be explained. But yes in short she's a psycho bitch, lol.

In that case I would say a name like Sonya or Sayana would fit hit a bit better. Rasha also works or perhaps Zebraka.

Hmm, actually, I think I rather like Tarana. It sounds primal, savage, tribal, all those things you'd expect out of a Turok game, haha.

Well then, I think we have a winner. Of course everybody here wins something for your participation, but your character shall be the protagonist of the story. If you'd prefer to do business over notes then send me one, but all I really need from you is a character bio, what you'd expect your character to do, how they would act, etc.

Will note you when I get off work.

You look like you weren't having fun so I figured this may happen. But it was your call. And in my opinion I would say you should name the Rex Gaia doing to how she is the mother of all dinosaurs and the most powerful. Like the actual Titan Gaia

It's kinda crap, but my own suggestion would be Carrie, due to the horror movie of the same name. Homage to a horror movie seems like the perfect type of thing for a, "psycho bitch," as you've put it.

I'm always about homages. But yeah, Carrie is not a good fit

Yeah, I'm terrible with names, really... ^^"

hey its good you are doing this man, umm well as for a names, best i can think of is names are Elrica which is German for Ruler of All, the Indominus Rex was Ruler of all the Dinosaurs there and it fits it so well. Lefu is another, its African for just plainly Death and that is what Indominous Rex was. and even, to be honest Persephone is great name too, it is Greek, English and German for Bringer of Death

out of those three i cant pick myself, thats up to you really, cause everyone has great names and its up to you to pick which you like, either way, we all should see it as fun for naming this Indominous Rex for you. i hope the contest goes good for you

oh ummm you already picked a winner around the same time i posted...umm boy this is awkward huh umm what do i do?