Oops...
10 years ago
So, I actually forgot about David and the Karthan's spirit in the that stone. I kinda had too many characters introduced and I may have overwhelmed myself slightly...I feel pretty bad about it, but I will try to put them back in the story. Maybe I'll have a chapter dedicated to just them, to develop them a little more. I don't know what I'll do, but I'll do something. For now, I'm going to continue writing part thirteen.